покритикуйте пожалуйста резюме: компьютерный техник
Добавлено: 21 сен 2011, 01:46
Интересны следующие вопросы
1. Есть ли грамматические ошибки
2. Отвечает ли резюме американскому стилю. (Например то что год рождения не указан и т.д.)
3. Есть ли смысловые некрасивости (Написано лишнее или наоборот)
4. Какое ваше общее впечатление о CV
5. Если вы компьютерный техник, администратор, или еще какой эникейщик, можете ли вы поделится своим успешным CV для примера
________________________________________
My_First_Name Surname
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185xx xxx st. Seattle, WA 980xx • Home Phone: (xxx)xxx-xxxx • Other Phone (xxx)xxx-xxxx xxxxxxx@gmail.com
Career Objective Experienced Hardware Computer Technician is looking for job in Greater Seattle area.
Secure a challenging position as a Computer Service Technician in a computer repair shop.
Education
Red Hat Certified Engineer RHCE course completion August 2009
Nazareth Illit Izreel College July 2002
Certification – Practical Electricity Engineer
Gomel Technical College of Railway Transportation June 1996
Certification – Industrial Electrician
High School No36 May 1992
Gomel, Belarus
Work Experience
Arrow Israel Ltd. Jan 2007 - Jan 2012
Hardware Computer Technician
-Solve and troubleshoot the problems related to desktop computers, industrial servers, laptops and different types of computers. (Using software: Burning Test. PC-CHECK, Memtest, etc)
-Travel to customers homes and businesses to provide direct technical support and upgrade solutions to end users
-Install new computers, hardware, software, and peripherals
-Reconfigure and upgrade existing systems to accommodate additional components
-Troubleshoot all areas of computer functioning; repair or upgrade as needed according to order
-Communicate issues, analysis, and solutions in easy-to-understand language.
-Troubleshoot all areas of computer functioning; repair or upgrade as needed according to order.
-Arrangement priority jobs, order spare parts, compilation costumer analysis and diagnostic reports, arrangement shipping, manage repair records in ERP “Priority”
Zim Integrated Shipping Services Ltd. Apr 1999 - Jan 2001
Electrician Officer
-Installs and repairs wiring, fixtures, and equipment for all electrical, electronic and computer services aboard high automation ship, following blueprints and wiring diagrams.
- Maintenances radio, radar, sonar, fire control, ship computer's systems and other electronic equipment
Professional Qualifications
Ship's electrician engineering officer
RHCE Certificate
Skills
Languages: Visual Basic, HTML, Bash script
Operating Systems: All Windows, MS-DOS, UNIX, Linux, Red Hat Linux
Programs: Command prompt, Bash, Microsoft Office
Interests
Home Linux Administration, Hiking
References
• first name Surname, Integration Manager, Arrow Israel Ltd., +phone XXX XXXX XXXX, manager_mail@arroweurope.com
1. Есть ли грамматические ошибки
2. Отвечает ли резюме американскому стилю. (Например то что год рождения не указан и т.д.)
3. Есть ли смысловые некрасивости (Написано лишнее или наоборот)
4. Какое ваше общее впечатление о CV
5. Если вы компьютерный техник, администратор, или еще какой эникейщик, можете ли вы поделится своим успешным CV для примера
________________________________________
My_First_Name Surname
________________________________________
185xx xxx st. Seattle, WA 980xx • Home Phone: (xxx)xxx-xxxx • Other Phone (xxx)xxx-xxxx xxxxxxx@gmail.com
Career Objective Experienced Hardware Computer Technician is looking for job in Greater Seattle area.
Secure a challenging position as a Computer Service Technician in a computer repair shop.
Education
Red Hat Certified Engineer RHCE course completion August 2009
Nazareth Illit Izreel College July 2002
Certification – Practical Electricity Engineer
Gomel Technical College of Railway Transportation June 1996
Certification – Industrial Electrician
High School No36 May 1992
Gomel, Belarus
Work Experience
Arrow Israel Ltd. Jan 2007 - Jan 2012
Hardware Computer Technician
-Solve and troubleshoot the problems related to desktop computers, industrial servers, laptops and different types of computers. (Using software: Burning Test. PC-CHECK, Memtest, etc)
-Travel to customers homes and businesses to provide direct technical support and upgrade solutions to end users
-Install new computers, hardware, software, and peripherals
-Reconfigure and upgrade existing systems to accommodate additional components
-Troubleshoot all areas of computer functioning; repair or upgrade as needed according to order
-Communicate issues, analysis, and solutions in easy-to-understand language.
-Troubleshoot all areas of computer functioning; repair or upgrade as needed according to order.
-Arrangement priority jobs, order spare parts, compilation costumer analysis and diagnostic reports, arrangement shipping, manage repair records in ERP “Priority”
Zim Integrated Shipping Services Ltd. Apr 1999 - Jan 2001
Electrician Officer
-Installs and repairs wiring, fixtures, and equipment for all electrical, electronic and computer services aboard high automation ship, following blueprints and wiring diagrams.
- Maintenances radio, radar, sonar, fire control, ship computer's systems and other electronic equipment
Professional Qualifications
Ship's electrician engineering officer
RHCE Certificate
Skills
Languages: Visual Basic, HTML, Bash script
Operating Systems: All Windows, MS-DOS, UNIX, Linux, Red Hat Linux
Programs: Command prompt, Bash, Microsoft Office
Interests
Home Linux Administration, Hiking
References
• first name Surname, Integration Manager, Arrow Israel Ltd., +phone XXX XXXX XXXX, manager_mail@arroweurope.com
