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В общем вот оно, то самое, резюме:
ANDREY
# Tel.
Coquitlam BC, E-mail:
OBJECTIVE System/Network Admin or Tech Support Specialist
PROFILE
• Excellent team player
• Self-educated and self-motivated
• Good learning ability and adaptation to the new environment
• Energetic and open person
• Excellent troubleshooting skills
• Hewlett - Packard (HP) Accredited Platform Specialist
• Over 5 year of HP service engineer experience
• Over 7 year of network administrating experience
• Over 8 year of system administrator experience
• General knowledge of accounting principles and accounting software.
IT SKILLS
• OS/Firewalls/Mail servers/Other servers: MS-DOS 3.31 – 6.22, MS Windows 3.xx, 9x, NT Server & Workstation, 2000 Server & Advanced Server & Professional, XP Professional & Home Edition, configuring Active Directory, Linux Slackware 8.0 – 10, MS ISA server, Kerio MailServer for Win32, Alt-n Mdeamon MailServer, Kerio Winroute Firewall for Win32, Norton GHOST, Acronis TrueImage Server, Symantec Antivirus Corporate Edition 8.0, Veritas BackupExec, SQUID proxy server for Win32 and Linux, IPTables, Apache, IServer(local ICQ server), BIND
• Languages/Technologies: C#, PHP, ASP.NET, ADO.NET, HTML, DHTML, XHTML, CSS/XSLT, JavaScript, IIS, XML.
• Software : MS Visual Studio.NET 2003; Windows 95/98/2000/XP; MS Office package; Front Page 2003; Adobe Photoshop; Adobe Acrobat, Adobe PageMaker
• Databases: Microsoft SQL Server 2000, Postgre SQL, MySQL.
• Protocols: TCP/IP, OSPF, BGP, EIGRP, IGRP, RIP v1-2, VPN, FTP, HTTP, etc.
WORK EXPERIENCE
“OJSC ABC” (October 2005- January 2006)
Technical support specialist
• Bank stuff counseling and troubleshooting
• Computer configuring, installation and upgrade
• Software and upgrades installation and configuring
• Hardware & software troubleshooting
• Local networks planning, networking and supporting

“ABC Ltd.” (2001-2005)
HP Service engineer
• Tech support 2 & 3 Levels
• Customers’ counseling and troubleshooting
• Computer assembling and configuring
• Software and upgrades installation and configuring
• Hardware & software troubleshooting
• Local networks planning, networking and configuring
• HP desktop and notebook computers service and ProCurve devices service
• Company client’s network and system administrating

“WHO ABC project” (2002-2004)
IT specialist (part time)

• Provided assistance and counseling support of project staff and pilot medical facilities employees in ABC program utilization. Participated in preparation and carrying out of trainings. Performed software installation and configuring; computer equipment and local network servicing.

“ABC Ltd.” (2000-2001)
Designer
• Book and Brochure’ design
• Lay out
• Software installation and configuring
• Network and system administrating

“ABC” newspaper (1998-2000)
Designer
• Lay out
• Network and system administrating
EDUCATION
• Master's degree in Information Technology, Moscow International University of Business and Information Technologies, 1997 - 2002.

CERTIFICATES

• APS – HP Commercial Desktops, Workstations and Notebooks
• APS – HP ProCurve Networking

Interests



REFERENCES AVAILABLE UPON REQUEST

ЗЫ.: Ну и если у кого есть какая работа по профилю то буду очень признателен, так как уже совсем запарился с поисками

.... а где OBJECTIVE? ... на кого эплаишься?

... я бы PROFILE лучше обозвал HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION, и все пункты касающиеся личных качеств вниз, надо начинать с того что умешь ...

Поправил )

Gatchinskiy писал(а):.... а где OBJECTIVE? ... на кого эплаишься?

... я бы PROFILE лучше обозвал HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION, и все пункты касающиеся личных качеств вниз, надо начинать с того что умешь ...

это правильно. я резюме без обджектива в мусорку сразу отправляю.

папа Карло
Так вроде када по мылу засылаю всегда указываю на какую позицию, ну и в самом теле письма указываю примерно так:
Dear ХХХ,



I wish to apply for the position as System administrator at your company, and I attach my resume for your reviewing; in addition, I would like to highlight my qualification as following:



Over 5 years of practical experience in technical support field.
Excelent HP server hardware knowledge
Extensive experience in System Administration with Microsoft Network Environment (Microsoft Windows NT and windows, Novell clients), Unix (Linux and FreeBSD), Web site Solution (Apache Server, Bind, IP Chains Firewall, NFS and Samba etc), Microsoft IIS.
Now I am preparing myself for CCNA certification. At this moment, I have already finished the 3rd semester of Cisco Network Academy.

I believe that my industrial experience, technical competence, proven initiative and consistent drive will be a good match with your organization. I look forward to hearing from you soon and I would be very pleased to attend an interview to your convenience to further explain how my qualification and background benefit your organization. Thank you for your consideration.

папа Карло писал(а): это правильно. я резюме без обджектива в мусорку сразу отправляю.

аааааааааааа ...

AndreyA писал(а):папа Карло
Так вроде када по мылу засылаю всегда указываю на какую позицию, ну и в самом теле письма указываю примерно так:
Dear ХХХ,



I wish to apply for the position as System administrator at your company, and I attach my resume for your reviewing; in addition, I would like to highlight my qualification as following:



Over 5 years of practical experience in technical support field.
Excelent HP server hardware knowledge
Extensive experience in System Administration with Microsoft Network Environment (Microsoft Windows NT and windows, Novell clients), Unix (Linux and FreeBSD), Web site Solution (Apache Server, Bind, IP Chains Firewall, NFS and Samba etc), Microsoft IIS.
Now I am preparing myself for CCNA certification. At this moment, I have already finished the 3rd semester of Cisco Network Academy.

I believe that my industrial experience, technical competence, proven initiative and consistent drive will be a good match with your organization. I look forward to hearing from you soon and I would be very pleased to attend an interview to your convenience to further explain how my qualification and background benefit your organization. Thank you for your consideration.

посмотри на этот вопрос с другой стороны.... цель резюме получить интервью. объектив это то, что человек хочет, кавер леттер просто относится к тому почему ты подходишь к данной позиции. в нем ты рассказываешь как ты поставишь то, что работодатель хочет.

Уникурсал Уникурсалыч писал(а):

папа Карло писал(а): это правильно. я резюме без обджектива в мусорку сразу отправляю.

аааааааааааа ...

ооо.... вспомнил

• Software : .. Windows 95/98/2000/XP; ...

... почему это здесь, а не в OS/Firewalls/Mail servers/Other servers:?

“ABC Ltd.” (2001-2005)
HP Service engineer
• Tech support 2 & 3 Levels
• Customers’ counseling and troubleshooting
• Computer assembling and configuring
• Software and upgrades installation and configuring
• Hardware & software troubleshooting
• Local networks planning, networking and configuring
• HP desktop and notebook computers service and ProCurve devices service
• Company client’s network and system administrating

дык, это отписка ... за 4 года тебе написать нечего? ... расширь, напиши что за компания, что делали, проекты, сервера, количество юзеров, звонков в кастомер саппорт, итд ... если нет канадского экспириенса то только на этом можно заострить внимание ...

Gatchinskiy
Спасибо, будем пробовать!

Вот поправил немого, поглядите и поругайте

ANDREY
# Tel.
Coquitlam BC, Canada E-mail:
OBJECTIVES
To obtain a position will allow me to completely apply my experience, education, and training, grow up both professionally and personally while actively contributing to the success of the company
HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION
• Hewlett - Packard (HP) Accredited Platform Specialist
• Strong experience in HP servers usage
• Good MS Windows Server platform knowledge
• Over 7 years experience in support & maintain network, software in a corporate environment.
• Over 7 year of network administrating experience
• Over 5 year of HP service engineer experience
• Over 8 year of system administrator experience
• Over 3 years of C#, PHP
PROFILE
• Excellent team player
• Ability to work under tight schedules in a calm and professional manner
• Self-educated and self-motivated
• Strong aptitude for learning new technologies and utilizing learned skills
• Good learning ability and adaptation to the new environment
• Energetic and open person
• Excellent troubleshooting skills
IT SKILLS
OPERATION SYSTEM: Windows 9x, NT, 2000, XP NT server/2000 AD/2003 AD(configuring Windows Domain & Active Directory, domain policy, WSUS) 7+ years
Linux Slackware, Debian ~2 years
FIREWALLS: MS ISA server, Kerio Winroute Firewall, IPTables 5+ years
MAIL SERVERS: Kerio MailServer for Win32, Alt-n Mdeamon MailServer 3 years
OTHER SERVERS SOFTWARE: Norton GHOST, Acronis TrueImage Server, Symantec Antivirus Corporate Edition, Veritas BackupExec 5 years
SQUID (Win32 and Linux), Apache, IIS 5-6 3 years
PROGRAMMING LANGUAGES & TECHNOLOGIES: C#, PHP, Visual FoxPro, VB 3 years
.NET, ASP.NET , ADO.NET, CSS, XSLT, XML, HTML, DHTML, XHTML 2 years
RDBMS: Microsoft SQL Server 2000 2 years
PostgreSQL | MySQL 1 year
Oracle 1 year
PROTOCOLS: TCP/IP, FTP, SFTP, HTTP, SMTP, POP, IMAP, DNS, DHCP 7 years
OSPF, IGRP, EIGRP, OSPF, SNMP, CDP 1 year
MISC SOFTWARE: MS Visio, Adobe Photoshop, Adobe PageMaker, CorelDraw 8+ years
WORK EXPERIENCE
“OJSC ABC” (October 2005- January 2006)
Senior technical support specialist
I took an active part in remount of server equipment due to number increase of used servers (HP and MSI) and active network equipment CISCO.
Our team has designed and carried out project on implementation of automated equipment inventory system with wide features for facilitation and acceleration of reporting to accounts department, etc.
Microsoft technologies such as Active Directory, Share Point Server, WSUS, SQL were mainly used.
I provided support of Cisco 2811 routers and HP ProLiant 380G3 cluster servers with MSA500G2.
• Local networks planning, networking and supporting over 200 nodes
• Bank stuff counseling and troubleshooting over 220 persons
• Software and upgrades installation and configuring by using WSUS and Symantec GHOST/Acronis Trueimage
• Hardware & software troubleshooting
• Computer configuring, installation and upgrade

“ABC Ltd.” (2001-2005)
HP Service engineer
I took participation in several big projects on technical re-equipment and modern IT technologies implementation in a system of Ministry of Health, Ministry of Finance, and other State and Private companies.
Over the Ministry of Health Project to its direct technical request (objective) our team has offered solutions based on HP Products. One of solutions was cluster system intended for enrolled population database processing and storage.
Racks with two cluster systems based on HP Proliant DL380 G3 and HP MSA500 were mounted by me on-site.
At the time of Project carried out for the Ministry of Finance, our team developed and implemented the LAN for the Central Subdivision of the Ministry of Finance.
In cases of difficulties in identification of faults due to its wandering nature, I had counseling with HP Head Office in Central Asia and EMEA HP Technical Support Department.
In close collaboration with Service Center Depute Director, Senior Programmer I have also taken part in designing and implementation of automated registration system for warranty equipment taken for repair that let decrease time-consume and increase service quality control.
Repeatedly performed upgrade and defective part exchange such as CPU, disk drives, memory, motherboard, SCSI and RAID controllers, hot-plug disk bays, etc., in servers, workstations and PC’s of HP.
• Tech support 2 & 3 Levels
• Customers’ counseling and troubleshooting
• Computer assembling and configuring
• Software and upgrades installation and configuring
• Hardware & software troubleshooting
• Local networks planning, cabling and configuring
• HP desktop and notebook computers service and ProCurve devices service
• Company client’s network and system administrating from 15 to 100 network nodes

“WHO ABC Package project” (2002-2004)
IT specialist (part time)

• Provided assistance and counseling support of project staff and pilot medical facilities employees in ABC program utilization. Participated in preparation and carrying out of trainings. Performed software installation and configuring; computer equipment and local network servicing. Writing bug reports to developers.

"ABC Ltd.” (2000-2001)
Designer
• Book and Brochure’ design
• Lay out
• Software installation and configuring
• Network and system administrating

“ABC” newspaper (1998-2000)
Designer
• Lay out
• Network and system administrating
EDUCATION
Moscow International University of Business and Information Technologies Bachelor degree in Computer Science 1997 - 2002

CERTIFICATES

• APS – HP Commercial Desktops, Workstations and Notebooks
• APS – HP ProCurve Networking

INTERESTS
• Computer networks
• Computer technologies
• Basketball
• Tennis
• Reading Sc.fi. and technical books
• Aquarium’s fish



REFERENCES AVAILABLE UPON REQUEST

objective не цепляет... опять же с ошибками. в резюме ошибок быть не должно.

self-educated второе место после которого я бы читать не стал.

папа Карло
А поконкретнее, если не затруднит? Чем вам не нравится self-educated(кажется понял, я имел в виде самообучающийся ) и какого рода ошибки вы нашли в Objectives?

AndreyA писал(а):папа Карло
А поконкретнее, если не затруднит? Чем вам не нравится self-educated(кажется понял, я имел в виде самообучающийся ) и какого рода ошибки вы нашли в Objectives?

самоучек мало кто людит если ты хочешь написать что быстро обучаешься просто напиши self-starter

самоучек мало кто людит если ты хочешь написать что быстро обучаешься просто напиши self-starter

Спасибо за новую формулировку А вот какая ошибка в obj. так и не понял