Ищу работу программера. Критика реюме приветствуется.

[Vog]

Приеду в сентябре. Вовсю смотрю работу, хоть на расстоянии думаю нереально. Вот резуме.
EXPERIENCE SUMMARY:
- Real time application development on embedded Linux.
- Inter-process communication using sockets and shared memory (for Linux and Windows).
- GUI development (MFC, QT3, QT4, CGI scripts).
- Object Oriented Programming, class interfaces design and development skills.
- Client-server application development.
- IP telephony application development.
- Network protocols: TCP/IP, UDP, SIP, RTP.
- Development of portable applications for Windows, Unix, Linux and embedded systems (Hardhat)
- Overall more than 6 years of experience of using C, C++, MS platform SDK, MFC, STL, VC++, QT(Linux)
- Source code control systems usage (CVS, SVN, VSS).
- Experience in DDK, ODBC, ADO, GNU make, Intel-8051 processor.
- Experience of work on big projects composed of several separate simultaneously developed subprojects.
- Basics in Java, Java Script, C#, .NET
- Operating systems: Windows 95/98/NT4/2000/XP/2003, UNIX, Linux, Sun OS.


PROGRAMMING SOFTWARE:
Windows: MS Visual Studio 2003/2005.
Linux: KDevelop, Visual Slick Edit, QT Designer, Eclipse SDK, Source Navigator.


SKILLS:
Software for telecommunication equipment (CommView, NetXRAY, EtheReal...).
MS Office, Adobe Acrobat, Photoshop, Corel Draw, System administration tools.
IP telephony software (soft-phones, IP-phones): installing, configuring, usage.


EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:

Feb. 2005 - up to now. Credence Systems Armenia LLC.
Senior Software Engineer.
Projects: Diamond, KALOS-2.

Feb. 2001- Feb. 2005. Epygi Labs AM LLC.
Software Engineer.
Project "Quadro" FIAD (Featured Integrated Access Device based on VoIP).
See http://www.epygi.com for details.

Apr. 1998 – Apr. 2000. School Teacher.
(As alternative army service)
Subjects:
- Informatics, mathematics, technical drawing.

1994-1998. Yerevan Research Institute of Optical and Physical Measurements, programmer.
- Programming (C/C++, Assembler, and Turbo Pascal) for experiments data processing.


EDUCATION:

July - August 2000. American University of Armenia.
International Scientific Technology Center (ISTC) Training Program
- Certificate of completion of “Java Programming“ course.

1995 – 1997. Graduate School of State Engineering University of Armenia (SEUA), Yerevan, Armenia
Masters degree in computer sciences and programming.

1990 – 1995. State Engineering University of Armenia (SEUA) Yerevan, Armenia
5 years Diploma of Engineer Programmer
- Graduated with excellence diploma

PERSONAL DATA:
Date of birth: March 31, 1973
Marital status: Married, have daughter and son.
Non-smoker, decent, hardworking, fast-learner.

LANGUAGES:
Armenian - native.
Fluent in Russian, English.

INTEREST:
Music (jazz), reading, cars, sports (swimming, sailing, windsurfing, alpine skiing, soccer)

[Ranger]

Personal data и Languages - выкинуть, остальное переписать и переформатировать. Objective, краткое (!) summary, матрица skills с годами, остальной фокус - на employment history с описанием проектов и ЧТО ИМЕННО в них вы делали. образцов в инете - море. полученное резюме-рыбу подрихтовывать под каждую позицию строго индивидуально.

удачи!

[Vog]

СПАСИБО за столь быстрый отклик, я тут похимичил еще...
до того не писал подробностей про емпоемент... слишком специфично звучит что ли...


OBJECTIVE:

To obtain a position in a growth oriented company to utilize my skills and abilities which fulfill goals of the company. Actively take part of product development and be able to receive feedback which allows make things better. To be in the environment where is possible to learn more and grow as professional.

EXPERIENCE SUMMARY:

- OOP, OOD programming skills.
- Good understanding of projects full life cycle.
- Experience of work in any level of programming: from lowest source development to GUIs.
- Good experience of work as a part of team.
- Experience of work on big projects composed of several separate simultaneously developed subprojects.


SKILLS:

- Real time application development on embedded Linux - 4 years.
- Inter-process communication using sockets or shared memory (for Linux and Windows) - 4 years.
- VC++, MFC - 4 years.
- QT3/QT4 - 2 years.
- OOP, OOD, C, C++, MS platform SDK, MFC, STL, GNU make - 6 years.
- Client-server applications development, IP telephony applications, TCP/IP, UDP, SIP, RTP protocols - 2 years.
- Development of portable code for Windows, UNIX, Linux - 4 years.
- Source code control systems usage (CVS, SVN, VSS) - 6 years.
- Experience in DDK, ODBC, ADO, Intel-8051 processor.
- Basics in Java, Java Script, C#, .NET
- Operating systems: Windows 95/98/NT4/2000/XP/2003, UNIX, Linux, Sun OS.


PROGRAMMING SOFTWARE/TOOLS:

Windows: MS Visual Studio 2003/2005, Software for telecommunication equipment (CommView, NetXRAY, EtheReal...).
MS Office, Adobe Acrobat, Photoshop, Corel Draw, System administration tools.
IP telephony software (soft-phones, IP-phones): installing, configuring, usage.

Linux: KDevelop, Visual Slick Edit, QT Designer, Eclipse SDK, Source Navigator.







EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:

Feb. 2005 - up to now. Credence Systems Armenia LLC.
Senior Software Engineer.
Project Diamond (started April 2007)
- Evaluated of possibility of CINT and/or JavaScript usage for tester specific API functions runtime interpreter.
- Working on first drafts of GUI and functionality requirements of Wavemaker for Diamond.
- Investigating perspectives of using previously made for WDB libraries to work with STIL.
- Porting all earlier created usable GUIs to QT4.

Project KALOS-2.
- Development of tools for database visualization to work with WDB (Waveform Database).
- Creating GUIs using QT3.
- Design of interface for "layer" library to support database <-> GUI communication.
- Implementation of "layer" library to support WDB standard.
- Interposes communication support for data changes synchronization between editors.

Feb. 2001- Feb. 2005. Epygi Labs AM LLC.
Software Engineer.
Project "Quadro" FIAD (Featured Integrated Access Device based on VoIP).
See http://www.epygi.com for details.

Project included several simultaneously developed separate subprojects.
- Design and implementation of Call Manager’s (PBX) new features and enhancements
(E.g. call statistics, call status provision, supplementary services...)
- Quadro product’s telephony configuration database development and maintenance, provision of convenient interface to database, dynamic updates system support (for Linux and Windows).
- Development and maintenance of configuration database version backward compatibility tool to support format changes and provide database repair.
- Development of several web pages using CGI scripts for configuration handling via network, being a part of Quadro product web-management framework.
- Development of inter-module messaging system using socket queues and shared memory (for Linux and Windows).
- Coordination of all work done in team with configuration related parts (for different branches of product).



Apr. 1998 – Apr. 2000. School Teacher.
(As alternative army service)
Subjects:
- Informatics, mathematics, technical drawing.

1994-1998. Yerevan Research Institute of Optical and Physical Measurements, programmer.
- Programming (C/C++, Assembler, and Turbo Pascal) for experiments data processing.


EDUCATION:

July - August 2000. American University of Armenia.
International Scientific Technology Center (ISTC) Training Program
- Certificate of completion of “Java Programming“ course.

1995 – 1997. Graduate School of State Engineering University of Armenia (SEUA), Yerevan, Armenia
Masters degree in computer sciences and programming.

1990 – 1995. State Engineering University of Armenia (SEUA) Yerevan, Armenia
5 years Diploma of Engineer Programmer
- Graduated with excellence diploma

LANGUAGES:
Armenian - native.
Fluent in Russian, English.

INTEREST:
Music (jazz), reading, cars, sports (swimming, sailing, windsurfing, alpine skiing, soccer)

[gsm]

Personal data и Languages - выкинуть, удачи!

Я бы интересы тоже убрал из этой версии.
Все глаголы в прошлом времени: Evaluated , Worked, Investigated ..

Kalos, Diamond - поясни, что это memory testers, добавь линк.
Укажи, что Credence, Epygi Labs - branch of US company.
Удачи!

[silent]

Про языки точно надо убрать. Если б французкий, кантониз или мандарин знал, то тогда был бы толк. А так один английский значение имеет. Такой пунктик "Languages" как у вас, на язык HR переводится как "сами мы не местные".

Ну и интересы тоже ни к чему.

Я бы (лично для себя) написал бы хоть пару строк о самих проектах (особенно, если проекты интересные). Чтобы было понятно какой у вас industry background в наличии. При столь короткой work history только на пользу пйдёт. Хоть визуально увеличит эту секцию.

"up to now" = "present"
"Certificate of completion of “Java Programming“ course" - не совсем английская фраза.

IMHO

[Gatchinskiy]

1. Objective размытое, много воды но так и не понятно что хочешь, надо сделать четко и по существу, одного предложения достаточно
2. точки в баллетед или намберед листах не ставят, убрать
3. в саммари указать в первой строчке общий экспириенс в ИТ, они это ищут
4. EMPLOYMENT HISTORY - мало, расширить и углубить

на мой взгляд, еще пока сырое резюме ...

[Vog]

OBJECTIVE поменял.
EMPLOYEMENT немного расширил, незнаю есть ли там чего углублять..
не начнет ли походить на "раздувание" мелочей?
А насчет "сырого резюме"... оно пока "сырее" чем сам экспириенс?


OBJECTIVE:

I have more than 6 years of software development experience and look for position in a company with dynamic environment to utilize my skills and abilities. I am good team player, able to learn fast, like to solve problems.

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EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:

Feb. 2005 - Aug. 2007. Credence Systems (branch of US company http://www.credence.com).
Senior Software Engineer.
The main orientation of projects are creating/re-implementing earlier done special tools for visualization, editing of digital pattern databases and debugging of test programs for IC test systems.

D-Series API Command Interpreter Research Project
- Evaluated the possibility and differences of CINT and JavaScript usage for development of D-Series API Command Interpreter.

Project Diamond (IC test system, http://www.credence.com/products/ate/diamond-10.php)
- Worked on first drafts of GUI and functionality requirements of Wavemaker for Diamond
- Investigated perspectives of using previously made for WDB libraries to work with STIL
- Redesigned database access libraries interface to use for QT4 designed GUI
- Added new functionality for reading STIL format databases
- Ported all earlier created usable GUIs to QT4

Project KALOS-2 (IC test system).
- Development of tools for database visualization to work with WDB (Waveform Database).
- Created GUIs using QT3.
- Designed the interface for "layer" library to support database <-> GUI communication.
- Implemented the "layer" library to support WDB standard.
- Interposes communication support for data changes synchronization between editors.

Feb. 2001- Feb. 2005. Epygi Labs (branch of US company http://www.epygi.com).
Software Engineer.
Project "Quadro" FIAD (Featured Integrated Access Device based on VoIP).
The device completely designed within company: hardware and software. The main goal was to make possible easy access from any local PSTN telephone line to IP (for chipper long distance calls), and on the other end back to local PSTN telephone network. In process of development arisen other devices ideas, wich are described on the company web site. Please visit http://www.epygi.com/products.htm for details.

Project included several simultaneously developed separate subprojects.
- Design and implementation of Call Manager’s (PBX) new features and enhancements on C++
(E.g. call statistics, call status provision, supplementary services...)
- Quadro product’s telephony configuration database development and maintenance, provision of convenient interface to database, dynamic updates system support (for Linux and Windows).
- Development and maintenance of configuration database version backward compatibility tool to support format changes and provide database repair.
- Development of several web pages using CGI scripts for configuration handling via network, being a part of Quadro product web-management framework.
- Development of inter-module messaging system using socket queues and shared memory (for Linux and Windows).
- Coordination of all work done in team with configuration related parts (for different branches of product).

[ura]

I have more than 6 years of software development experience and look for position in a company with dynamic environment to utilize my skills and abilities. I am good team player, able to learn fast, like to solve problems.


With more than 6 year experience in software development I am looking forward for a position in a company with dynamic environment to utilize my skills and abilities and share my knowledge with the others. I am an excellent team player with strong problem solving skills and able to learn fast.


Feb. 2005 - Aug. 2007. Credence Systems (branch of US company http://www.credence.com).
Senior Software Engineer.
The main orientation of projects are creating/re-implementing earlier done special tools for visualization, editing of digital pattern databases and debugging of test programs for IC test systems.

Feb. 2005 - Aug. 2007. Credence Systems (branch of the US company http://www.credence.com).
Senior Software Engineer.
The major project objectives are
- creation and/or re-implemention previosuly implemented specialized tools for visualization, editing of digital pattern databases and debugging the test programs for IC test systems.

What is IC? если резюме общего плана, то наверное это надо расшифровать.


D-Series API Command Interpreter Research Project
- Evaluated the possibility and differences of CINT and JavaScript usage for development of D-Series API Command Interpreter.

Тоже не помешает пояснить, а то HR может не въехать.

D-Series API Command Interpreter Research Project
- Evaluated a possibility and differences in CINT and JavaScript approach for D-Series API Command Interpreter development.

По сути должно читаться более мягко, чтобы не напрянало слух специальными терминами которые могут быть не совсем понятны слету.
Это мое мнение, не обязательно может совпадать с другим.
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[Gadi]

OBJECTIVE:

I have more than 6 years of software development experience and look for position in a company with dynamic environment to utilize my skills and abilities.

Я почему-то более чем уверен, что потенциального работодателя очень слабо волнует тот факт, что вы жаждете утилизировать СВОИ навыки и возможности. Его, я думаю. более заинтересовало бы ваше желание ВНЕСТИ ВКЛАД (contribute) в развитие и процветание ЕГО компании. Мол, столько всякого имею - был бы счастлив найти тех кому все мое добро пригодилось бы.

Пойнт в том. чтобы умудриться показать, ЧТО все ваши предыдущие работодатели выиграли от вашего присутствия в их компаниях, и, тем самым, убедить и будушего работодателя что и он тоже не проиграет.

Важная психологическая деталь - даже т.н. плейсмент агенства преследуют цель получить выгоду СЕБЕ, а не ПОМОЧЬ ВАМ. Вот на это я бы и бил.

[Groundhog]

По моему важно указать что сделано ЛИЧНО.
Проект может быть интертсный, а где ВАШ вклад?
Рекомендую вставить : Лично УСПЕШО выполнена
работа - бла-бла-бла..., что позволило бла-бла-бла...
Написано и отлажено 10000... строк кода (если есть).
Оптимизировано бла-бла-бла - выявлена и исправлена
критическая секция в коде что уменьшило время реакции в 10... раз.
Наидено, проверено и использовано в проекте готовое решение, что
сократило время разработки в 10.. раз (в результате чего компания
вышибла к чертовой матери 10 ... программистов с суммарной зарплатой
100000... ).
И побольше таких пунктиков в EMPLOYMENT HISTORY

[Groundhog]

Dа , попросите чтобы кто нибудь
английский подкорректировал,
коряво как-то написано,
глаз режет. Что еще
за "layer" library, просто возмите
fpазы из какого нибудь описания,
что-бы не изобретать велосипед.

[Шэф]

ох... трудно тебе это объяснить... ну вот например вот это:

I am good team player, able to learn fast, like to solve problems.

прикол такой: I am good..., (am) able..., (am) еще какое-н прилагательное, а у тебя - бум! опять глагол: like.

Это все, пипец. Серьезный работодатель на работу не возьмет.
Не обижайся, это я не пальцуюсь тут. Английский действительно очень плох.

Мой совет - брось, не торопись. Just relax. Приезжай, пару месяцев просто побездельничай, смотри телевизор, слушай радио сколько сможешь, до тошноты. Постепенно в голове уложатся фразеологизмы. Ну если очень невтерпеж - пойдешь сразу по приезду в центр по трудоустройству - там резюме-то тебе поправят. Потом пойдешь в другой - там еще поправят. Заодно помогут первую работу найти - попроще. Good luck.