Коллеги, посмотрите, пожалуйста, резюме. ;-)

[OldVarg]

Понимаю, что тема не новая, но если будет время и желание что-нибудь подсказать/подправить, я буду вам благодарен.


Dmitry Glazyrin

Objective: Seeking for post of Network Analyst, System Network Administrator, Computer Technician.

Summary: Computer Specialist with great experience providing technical assistance to business professionals. Demonstrated ability to combine computer skills, support experience, related education and time sense to exceed technical, business, and customer requirements. Skilled at troubleshooting and fixing problems. Professionally certified by CompTIA and Microsoft.

Technical Skills

Hardware: CPUs, motherboards, IDE and SCSI devices, memory, VGA cards, printers, scanners, sound cards, universal power supplies, I/O ports, IRQ settings, com ports, jumper settings, backup devices, RAID controllers, file and print servers, application servers & etc.

Software: All Windows family: WIN 3.11/95/98/NT/2000/XP/2003/
A majority of common applications (MS Office & etc)

Networking: network interface cards, hubs, bridges, switches, routers, cabling, print servers, network storage devices. TCP/IP stack knowledge, Nwlink familiarity, Wi-Fi experience.

Capabilities:

- System Design and Installation: Built computer systems to customer specification for private clients and companies, as field technician and as computer consultant.
- System Repair and Troubleshooting: Diagnosed and repaired computers to component and software level to meet customer needs.
- Networking design and implementation.
- End User Training: Provided training to end users on systems use and operating systems as a field technician and consultant.
- Tech Support Management: Supervised over team of five computer technicians.

Certifications: A+, Network + , MCSA, MCP

Training in Progress: Linux/Unix Networking, Linux/Unix Server/Workstation

Education: Moscow Institute of Physics and Technology (MIPT), Moscow, Russia,
Bachelor of Science (Computing Technology), 1993
Self-education – continuously.

Work Experience

1999 – 2006 Company "ONE", ISP, Moscow region, Russia

Position: Senior Manager of Support Team.
Task: To maintain network, to provide desktop service for about 5000 clients (in the field) and staff (at the company office).
Duties: Coordinate the teamwork efforts, control of resources, lead meetings, confirm the choosing of the equipment for a project goal achievement, direct of technical tasks solving.

1995-1999 Company "TWO", Telecommunication Company, Moscow, Russia.

Position: Network Analyst
Task: To create and maintain network of Common Access Points (120 points) to PSTN.
Duties: Choose the equipment, mount the equipment, create and implement system of “thin-client” technology (Citrix Metaframe) for remote diagnosis. Collect the information from the remote nodes based on T-Mail software.

1993-1995 Company "Three", Manufacture Cooperative, Moscow, Russia.

Position: Repair Department Technician.
Task: To provide the efficient repairing of clients computer systems.
Duties: Diagnosis and repair of computer system. Installation and setup hardware and peripherals. Software installation. Work independently in the field.

[Anry]

отделите быков от коров. На кого резюме: технишиан или сис. админ.?! Нужно их отделить друг от друга, а не перемешивать.

[Gatchinskiy]

вкратце, что бросилось сразу в глаза ...

Objective: Seeking for post of Network Analyst, System Network Administrator, Computer Technician.

... вместо post все таки бы поставил position, Network Analyst и Computer Technician очень разняться и по уровню и по образованию и по масштабу поэтому наверное поставил бы что-нибудь универсальное ... e.g. System Network Administrator ...

Summary: Computer Specialist with great experience providing technical assistance to business professionals. Demonstrated ability to combine computer skills, support experience, related education and time sense to exceed technical, business, and customer requirements. Skilled at troubleshooting and fixing problems. Professionally certified by CompTIA and Microsoft.

не нашел в саммари сколько лет экспириенса, это хотят видеть сразу .. e.g. 6+

Technical Skills

Hardware: CPUs, motherboards, IDE and SCSI devices, memory, VGA cards, printers, scanners, sound cards, universal power supplies, I/O ports, IRQ settings, com ports, jumper settings, backup devices, RAID controllers, file and print servers, application servers & etc.

Software: All Windows family: WIN 3.11/95/98/NT/2000/XP/2003/
A majority of common applications (MS Office & etc)

Networking: network interface cards, hubs, bridges, switches, routers, cabling, print servers, network storage devices. TCP/IP stack knowledge, Nwlink familiarity, Wi-Fi experience.

Capabilities:

- System Design and Installation: Built computer systems to customer specification for private clients and companies, as field technician and as computer consultant.
- System Repair and Troubleshooting: Diagnosed and repaired computers to component and software level to meet customer needs.
- Networking design and implementation.
- End User Training: Provided training to end users on systems use and operating systems as a field technician and consultant.
- Tech Support Management: Supervised over team of five computer technicians.

... все таки бы подробнее расписал так как это основная часть, оформил бы в ввиде bulleted list и подробно по каждой категории там

Workstations & Servers: ....
Software: ....
Hardware: ....
Peripherals: ...
Security: ...
Network: ...
Protocols: ...

etc ...

Certifications: A+, Network + , MCSA, MCP

Training in Progress: Linux/Unix Networking, Linux/Unix Server/Workstation

Education: Moscow Institute of Physics and Technology (MIPT), Moscow, Russia,
Bachelor of Science (Computing Technology), 1993
Self-education – continuously.

Education and Certification в самый конец, если сертификаты конкретно по network и администрированию, можно конкретное название и номер трака, для админа это катит ...

Work Experience

1999 – 2006 Company "ONE", ISP, Moscow region, Russia

Position: Senior Manager of Support Team.

Senior Manager убрать и не вспоминать до тех пор пока не достигнешь здесь такой высоты, просто e.g. Senior Network Administrator or smth else ...

Task: To maintain network, to provide desktop service for about 5000 clients (in the field) and staff (at the company office).
Duties: Coordinate the teamwork efforts, control of resources, lead meetings, confirm the choosing of the equipment for a project goal achievement, direct of technical tasks solving.

... очень мало по работе на которой работал 6 лет, я бы полную страницу накатал .. по ней будет много вопросов ...

[ajkj3em]

язык практически никакой .. то есть поправить его можно конечено, но
на первом же интервью будут крупные проблемы.

структура и фактическое наполнение резюме тоже не ахти, посмотрите
предыдущие обсуждения. кого как вы думаете интересует ваш опыт с
Windows 3.1 например ?

[Alenka]

Понимаю, что тема не новая, но если будет время и желание что-нибудь подсказать/подправить, я буду вам благодарен.

английский править надо будет: какое-то принципиальное пренебрежение артиклями. предлоги кое-где странные используются.

лучше править на следующей версии, эту, я понимаю, все равно переписывать советуют. Давай новую версию в студию...