Толковый Windows cисадмин ищет работу

[Leo Gan]

Cходи-ка ты сюда
http://forum.privet.com/viewforum.php?f ... 0779d0d361
и ознакомься с "коллекция полезных URL по темам раздела РАБОТА", плюс с первыми тремя темами.
Потом найди там резюме по близкой к себе специальноси. Не буду ссылки давать, там таких резюме полно.
И почитай трейды по обсуждению резюме. Думаю, после этого у тебя в голове появится нормальная схема, как это здесь работает. По крайней мере мне в свое время это сильно помогло.

[Stanislav]

Как бы вам, сэр, его переправить? Или здесь запостить?

Рыбу в студию!

[sbv]

Рыбу? Да без проблем! Только скажите как? Рылся 30 минут и не смог найти ни способа отправки Личных Собщений ни способа приаттачить файл к сообщению. Даже на 2 ЛС не ответил - не нашёл как. Сорри. Я не могу больше времени тратить. У меня есть и работа и др. дела. Если подскажете как это сделать - принесу "кильку" моментом!

[Ludovik]

например так
docs.google.com (логин как на gmail). после аттача надо дать публичный доступ на файл

[johndoe]

...потом со мной на другом форуме заделились "стандартной формой всех-прошибаюшего-резюме"

да да... вот будет интересно что это за чудо форма такая.. что то вроде брауновского потерянного символа наверное. А то столько книг прочитал по этой науке, рекрутеров перетряс, а тут бац ...

[Yury]

например так
docs.google.com (логин как на gmail). после аттача надо дать публичный доступ на файл

или просто ctrl+c/ctrl+v (если, конечно, то резюме не полиграфическими штучками прошибает)

[Grey]

OBJECTIVE: To obtain a Network/System Administrator position

CAREER PROFILE
Over 5 years of experience encompassing all aspects of operating systems, implementation, migration, upgrade, security analysis, troubleshooting and support. Over 8 years of experience providing end user support. I'm also flexible in terms of traveling.

HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION
• Expert level of experience in all phases of Windows 2003 (2008) design, deployment, support and administration;
• Working knowledge of backup technologies;
• Working knowledge in MS Exchange, SQL, ISA installing, configuring, administering and support;
• Hands on knowledge of Linux;
• Strong experience in operation systems and hardware performance tuning, health data collection and support;
• Strong knowledge and extensive experience in computer, networks, operating, maintaining and troubleshooting Windows environment as well as repairing any technical (hardware and/or software) situations that computers could have at any time;
• Working knowledge of WAN / LAN, VPN, NAT, traffic shaping technologies and protocols;
• Quick learner with proven capability to work fine under pressure, equally well in a team environment and independently.

TECHNICAL SKILLS
Operation systems: Windows 2003 (8 yrs), 2008 (1 yrs), 2000 (2 yrs), VMware Workstation/Hyper-V virtualization(4/1 yrs), Windows XP/Vista/7 (8/2/1 yrs);

Servers: MS Exchange 2003 (1 yrs), MS SQL 2005 (3 yrs), MS IIS (4 yrs), Apache HTTP (3 yrs), Apache Tomcat (2 yrs), MDaemon (3 yrs);
Applications: MS Office 97-2007 (10 yrs);
Internet security: MS ISA (3 yrs), SQUID (2 yrs), Kerio WinRoute Firewall (3 yrs);

WORK EXPERIENCE
05.2007-05.2010, Network Administrator, “Datasite Technology”, Tashkent, Uzbekistan

• Planed and implemented network migration for over 120 users in new office;
• Installed, configured and supported AD, DNS, ISA and SQL on Win2008 Hyper-V with RAID and on VMware;
• Administering and supporting current systems and networks; planning new software, hardware and network improvements according to our business needs by management requests;
• Supported 1 local Win2008, 2 local and 4 remote Win 2003 servers, around 120 XP and Vista workstations;
• Set up ISA, FTP, SQL and DNS servers;
• Designed and remotely deployed 2 Windows 2003 servers with IIS, Apache, Tomcat and SQL;
• Designed and implemented firewalls, antivirus and anti-spam solutions;
• Designed and implemented backup and disaster recovery solutions;
• Configured and repaired networks and servers remotely using RDP;
• Monitored local and remote Windows servers performance;
• Set up workstations, printers and scanners;
• Implemented software according to business needs.

02/2006-01/2007, Systems Administrator, Central Computing & Control Center of TOSHISSIQQUVAT, Tashkent, Uzbekistan.

• Monitored Windows and Linux servers software;
• Supported 16 Win 2003 servers, around 200 XP workstations in 12 branches;
• Planned, designed and controlled in implementing the new LAN structure during changing our main branch office. Created all systems, networks and data storage from the scratch according to business requirements given by management;
• Set up ISA, FTP, SQL and DNS servers;
• Designed and implemented AD structure, GP and security for our office and branches;
• Designed and implemented firewalls, antivirus and anti-spam solutions;
• Created and implemented power backup solution;
• Set up workstations, printers and scanners. Regularly purchased servers, desktops and switches;
• Implemented remote customer users’ access to corporate network using VPN and RRAS (PPTP, L2TP, and IPSec). Configured and repaired networks and servers remotely using RDP;
• Coordinated activity of the branch IT specialists in the corresponding areas;
• Administering and supporting current systems and networks; planning new software, hardware and network improvements according to our business needs by management requests.

01/2002 – 01/2006, Technical support engineer, Private Company “HAQ TAROZI”, Tashkent, Uzbekistan
• Maintained, troubleshooted and administered the use of local area networks (LANs), wide area networks (WANs) and connections to the Internet
• Evaluated and installed computer hardware, networking software, operating system and applications
• Planned, prepared and implemented migrations from Windows 98 to Windows XP.
• Provided problem-solving services to network users
• Performed data backups and disaster recovery operations

07/2001 – 12/2001, PC Operator, “Nashr Matbaa” Department (TEIC), Uzbekistan
• Created and prepared to print publications and documents
• Installed, maintained, and supported print hardware and software.
• Provided problem-solving services to print hardware users.
• Performed data backups and disaster recovery operations.


EDUCATION
Bachelor’s Diploma in Telecommunications 1997 - 2001
Tashkent Electrotechnical Institute of Communication, Tashkent, Uzbekistan

MCSE – EC “NetDec”, Uzbekistan:
• Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer on Microsoft Windows Server 2003 2006

PROFESSIONAL CERTIFICATES
Microsoft: MCP, MCSA on 2003, MCSE Security on 2003;

REFERENCES Available upon request

[Leo Gan]

Я желтеньким подкрасил "некрасивые" ИМХО выражения. Я бы либо убрал, либо поправил.
Красненьким разной степени - то, что режет глаза.

OBJECTIVE: To obtain a Network/System Administrator position

CAREER PROFILE
Over 5 years of experience encompassing all aspects of operating systems, implementation, migration, upgrade, security analysis, troubleshooting and support. Over 8 years of experience providing end user support. I'm also flexible in terms of traveling.

HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION
• Expert level of experience in all phases of Windows 2003 (2008) design, deployment, support and administration;
• Working knowledge of backup technologies;
• Working knowledge in MS Exchange, SQL, ISA installing, configuring, administering and support;
• Hands on knowledge of Linux;
• Strong experience in operation systems and hardware performance tuning, health data collection and support;
• Strong knowledge and extensive experience in computer, networks, operating, maintaining and troubleshooting Windows environment as well as repairing any technical (hardware and/or software) situations that computers could have at any time;
• Working knowledge of WAN / LAN, VPN, NAT, traffic shaping technologies and protocols;

There should be a list of devices, protocols etc.

• Quick learner with proven capability to work fine under pressure, equally well in a team environment and independently.

TECHNICAL SKILLS
Operation systems: Windows 2003 (8 yrs), 2008 (1 yrs), 2000 (2 yrs), VMware Workstation/Hyper-V virtualization(4/1 yrs), Windows XP/Vista/7 (8/2/1 yrs);

Servers: MS Exchange 2003 (1 yrs), MS SQL 2005 (3 yrs), MS IIS (4 yrs), Apache HTTP (3 yrs), Apache Tomcat (2 yrs), MDaemon (3 yrs);
Applications: MS Office 97-2007 (10 yrs);
Internet security: MS ISA (3 yrs), SQUID (2 yrs), Kerio WinRoute Firewall (3 yrs);

WORK EXPERIENCE
05.2007-05.2010, Network Administrator, “Datasite Technology”, Tashkent, Uzbekistan

• Planed and implemented network migration for over 120 users in new office;
• Installed, configured and supported AD, DNS, ISA and SQL on Win2008 Hyper-V with RAID and on VMware;
• Administering and supporting current systems and networks; planning new software, hardware and network improvements according to our business needs by management requests;
• Supported 1 local Win2008, 2 local and 4 remote Win 2003 servers, around 120 XP and Vista workstations;
• Set up ISA, FTP, SQL and DNS servers;
• Designed and remotely deployed 2 Windows 2003 servers with IIS, Apache, Tomcat and SQL;
• Designed and implemented firewalls, antivirus and anti-spam solutions;
• Designed and implemented backup and disaster recovery solutions;
• Configured and repaired networks and servers remotely using RDP;
• Monitored local and remote Windows servers performance;
• Set up workstations, printers and scanners;
• Implemented software according to business needs.

02/2006-01/2007, Systems Administrator, Central Computing & Control Center of TOSHISSIQQUVAT, Tashkent, Uzbekistan.

• Monitored Windows and Linux servers software;
• Supported 16 Win 2003 servers, around 200 XP workstations in 12 branches;
• Planned, designed and controlled in implementing the new LAN structure during changing our main branch office. Created all systems, networks and data storage from the scratch according to business requirements given by management;
• Set up ISA, FTP, SQL and DNS servers;
• Designed and implemented AD structure, GP and security for our office and branches;
• Designed and implemented firewalls, antivirus and anti-spam solutions;
• Created and implemented power backup solution;
• Set up workstations, printers and scanners. Regularly purchased servers, desktops and switches;
• Implemented remote customer users’ access to corporate network using VPN and RRAS (PPTP, L2TP, and IPSec). Configured and repaired networks and servers remotely using RDP;
• Coordinated activity of the branch IT specialists in the corresponding areas;
• Administering and supporting current systems and networks; planning new software, hardware and network improvements according to our business needs by management requests.

01/2002 – 01/2006, Technical support engineer, Private Company “HAQ TAROZI”, Tashkent, Uzbekistan
• Maintained, troubleshooted and administered the use of local area networks (LANs), wide area networks (WANs) and connections to the Internet
• Evaluated and installed computer hardware, networking software, operating system and applications
• Planned, prepared and implemented migrations from Windows 98 to Windows XP.
• Provided problem-solving services to network users
• Performed data backups and disaster recovery operations

07/2001 – 12/2001, PC Operator, “Nashr Matbaa” Department (TEIC), Uzbekistan
• Created and prepared to print publications and documents
• Installed, maintained, and supported print hardware and software.
• Provided problem-solving services to print hardware users.
• Performed data backups and disaster recovery operations.


EDUCATION
Bachelor’s Diploma in Telecommunications 1997 - 2001
Tashkent Electrotechnical Institute of Communication, Tashkent, Uzbekistan

MCSE – EC “NetDec”, Uzbekistan:
• Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer on Microsoft Windows Server 2003 2006

PROFESSIONAL CERTIFICATES
Microsoft: MCP, MCSA on 2003, MCSE Security on 2003;

REFERENCES Available upon request

[Grey]

А как бы Вы поменяли "некрасивые" выражения, и чем по Вашему можно заменить то что режет глаза. Первый раз составляю таким образом резюме, поэтому тяжеловато найти аналогии и более "правильные" выражения. Буду Вам очень признателен.

Я желтеньким подкрасил "некрасивые" ИМХО выражения. Я бы либо убрал, либо поправил.
Красненьким разной степени - то, что режет глаза.

OBJECTIVE: To obtain a Network/System Administrator position

CAREER PROFILE
Over 5 years of experience encompassing all aspects of operating systems, implementation, migration, upgrade, security analysis, troubleshooting and support. Over 8 years of experience providing end user support. I'm also flexible in terms of traveling.

HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION
• Expert level of experience in all phases of Windows 2003 (2008) design, deployment, support and administration;
• Working knowledge of backup technologies;
• Working knowledge in MS Exchange, SQL, ISA installing, configuring, administering and support;
• Hands on knowledge of Linux;
• Strong experience in operation systems and hardware performance tuning, health data collection and support;
• Strong knowledge and extensive experience in computer, networks, operating, maintaining and troubleshooting Windows environment as well as repairing any technical (hardware and/or software) situations that computers could have at any time;
• Working knowledge of WAN / LAN, VPN, NAT, traffic shaping technologies and protocols;

There should be a list of devices, protocols etc.

• Quick learner with proven capability to work fine under pressure, equally well in a team environment and independently.

TECHNICAL SKILLS
Operation systems: Windows 2003 (8 yrs), 2008 (1 yrs), 2000 (2 yrs), VMware Workstation/Hyper-V virtualization(4/1 yrs), Windows XP/Vista/7 (8/2/1 yrs);

Servers: MS Exchange 2003 (1 yrs), MS SQL 2005 (3 yrs), MS IIS (4 yrs), Apache HTTP (3 yrs), Apache Tomcat (2 yrs), MDaemon (3 yrs);
Applications: MS Office 97-2007 (10 yrs);
Internet security: MS ISA (3 yrs), SQUID (2 yrs), Kerio WinRoute Firewall (3 yrs);

WORK EXPERIENCE
05.2007-05.2010, Network Administrator, “Datasite Technology”, Tashkent, Uzbekistan

• Planed and implemented network migration for over 120 users in new office;
• Installed, configured and supported AD, DNS, ISA and SQL on Win2008 Hyper-V with RAID and on VMware;
• Administering and supporting current systems and networks; planning new software, hardware and network improvements according to our business needs by management requests;
• Supported 1 local Win2008, 2 local and 4 remote Win 2003 servers, around 120 XP and Vista workstations;
• Set up ISA, FTP, SQL and DNS servers;
• Designed and remotely deployed 2 Windows 2003 servers with IIS, Apache, Tomcat and SQL;
• Designed and implemented firewalls, antivirus and anti-spam solutions;
• Designed and implemented backup and disaster recovery solutions;
• Configured and repaired networks and servers remotely using RDP;
• Monitored local and remote Windows servers performance;
• Set up workstations, printers and scanners;
• Implemented software according to business needs.

02/2006-01/2007, Systems Administrator, Central Computing & Control Center of TOSHISSIQQUVAT, Tashkent, Uzbekistan.

• Monitored Windows and Linux servers software;
• Supported 16 Win 2003 servers, around 200 XP workstations in 12 branches;
• Planned, designed and controlled in implementing the new LAN structure during changing our main branch office. Created all systems, networks and data storage from the scratch according to business requirements given by management;
• Set up ISA, FTP, SQL and DNS servers;
• Designed and implemented AD structure, GP and security for our office and branches;
• Designed and implemented firewalls, antivirus and anti-spam solutions;
• Created and implemented power backup solution;
• Set up workstations, printers and scanners. Regularly purchased servers, desktops and switches;
• Implemented remote customer users’ access to corporate network using VPN and RRAS (PPTP, L2TP, and IPSec). Configured and repaired networks and servers remotely using RDP;
• Coordinated activity of the branch IT specialists in the corresponding areas;
• Administering and supporting current systems and networks; planning new software, hardware and network improvements according to our business needs by management requests.

01/2002 – 01/2006, Technical support engineer, Private Company “HAQ TAROZI”, Tashkent, Uzbekistan
• Maintained, troubleshooted and administered the use of local area networks (LANs), wide area networks (WANs) and connections to the Internet
• Evaluated and installed computer hardware, networking software, operating system and applications
• Planned, prepared and implemented migrations from Windows 98 to Windows XP.
• Provided problem-solving services to network users
• Performed data backups and disaster recovery operations

07/2001 – 12/2001, PC Operator, “Nashr Matbaa” Department (TEIC), Uzbekistan
• Created and prepared to print publications and documents
• Installed, maintained, and supported print hardware and software.
• Provided problem-solving services to print hardware users.
• Performed data backups and disaster recovery operations.


EDUCATION
Bachelor’s Diploma in Telecommunications 1997 - 2001
Tashkent Electrotechnical Institute of Communication, Tashkent, Uzbekistan

MCSE – EC “NetDec”, Uzbekistan:
• Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer on Microsoft Windows Server 2003 2006

PROFESSIONAL CERTIFICATES
Microsoft: MCP, MCSA on 2003, MCSE Security on 2003;

REFERENCES Available upon request

[Leo Gan]

Нее... вопросы по английскому языку - не ко мне. Заметить корявые выражения я могу иногда , а исправить их - это не ко мне. (Наверняка в моем резюме не меньше, просто глаз замылился)

1. СAREER PROFILE я бы убрал вообще. Никого он не интересует. HIGHLIGHTS OF QUALIFICATION объединил со SKILLS.
2. В OBJECTIVE д.б. только название позиции, на которую подаешься и, м.б.указать for Full-Time or Contractor position. Но это если есть выбор, что для твоей специализации - не уверен.
3. SKILLS- а) На мой взгляд это д.б. тупой список технологий, тулзов, без наречий и глаголов. Можно добавить кол-во лет работы с технологией. б) Я бы *обязательно* добавил версии тулзов. Смотри вакансии на джоб-сайтах, работодатели обычно указывают их, т.к.это для них важно. Поэтому и для нас должно быть важно. Плюс это добавит конкретики.
К примеру: " Hands on knowledge of Linux" --> Это можно расписать, если на соотв.позицию подаешься, в десятках строк. Названия дистрибутивов, версии, и т.д. и т.п. А так выглядит (извиняюсь, без обид) ... типа ты только название ОС знаешь, что наверняка не так.
То же и про "Working knowledge of WAN / LAN, VPN, NAT".
Я так делаю: составляю "громадное" резюме, в котором все подробнейшим образом расписано, перечислено. После я его нещадно режу, делаю 3 резюме по моим основным специализациям. Я те, в свою очередь, затачиваю-режу под конкретные позиции.

4. WORK EXPERIENCE. Названия последний 3-4 последний позиция д.б.одинаковыми, таким же как позиция, на которую ты подаешься. Здесь есть довольно устоявшиеся названия, надо им следовать. Посмотри на монстре http://monsterca.salary.com/ Кстати http://career-advice.monster.ca/job-hun ... reers.aspx - с этим, надеюсь, ознакомился?
Страну надо убрать, 100%. Все такие названия, типа TOSHISSIQQUVAT заменить на вольный перевод, либо тоже убрать. Если, конечно, они не знамениты здесь. Это резюме - не трудовая книжка, никого не интересуют эти названия, только твой экспириенс. Зачем народ отпугивать. Они же не знают, что там за названием, даже если это компания с сотнями тысяч работников и милиардным оборотом.

5. Сертификаты. Поподробнее, плз. Аббревиатуры должны идти за полным названием, чтобы роботы могли найти и то и другое.

А так уже более-менее.

[Grey]

Спасибо

[PIX]

Network administraтором тут не пахнет - убрать обязательно и забыть как страшный сон.
рекомендую убрать последнюю строчку - про референсы. Это и так понятно и хорошим тоном не является в наши дни.

I'm also flexible in terms of traveling- слышал что так пишут зачем не понимаю.

TECHNICAL SKILLS - в конец
MS Exchange 2003 (1 yrs) - я б убрал 1 год, хотябы из резюме. Выглядит очень несолидно.
MS Office 97-2007 (10 yrs); - убрать ИМХО
если сказал выше про бэкап так хоть тут подтверди а то выглядит несерьезно.

Я вроде говорил раньше - резюме на хелпдеск либо сисадмин в небольшую контору. Опыта в продакшене серьезном нет - ни по качеству ни по количеству.

[polkov]

TECHNICAL SKILLS - в конец

категорически не согласен

MS Exchange 2003 (1 yrs) - я б убрал 1 год, хотябы из резюме. Выглядит очень несолидно.
MS Office 97-2007 (10 yrs); - убрать ИМХО

а вообше правила такие-
-прочитал книжку или видел изза плеча - 1 год
-сам пальчиками чтонить трогал чутьчуть - 3 года
-серьезно поработал - 5 лет и выше в зависимости от претензий , наглости и тербований работодателя.

[Anry]

TECHNICAL SKILLS
Operation systems: Windows 2003 (8 yrs),

А это как, с альфы версии? или на дворе уже 2011й год?

[PIX]

категорически не согласен

- Дело хозяйское. По мне выглядит несолидно да мы и говорили - ревалентный опыт вперед вперед. По мне так кому надо тот прочитает, робот всяк найдет в любом месте.

прочитал книжку или видел изза плеча - 1 год

- Вот именно