Наслышан о отзывчивых людях форума, обращаюсь с подобной же просьбой поругайте резюме. В той жизни занимался компьютерной безопасностью.

резюме слал много, толку чуть. чуствую, что чего то не хватает в этом супе, а чего не пойму. хотя это уже пятая или шестая версия резюме.
Так что Коллективный Разум, прошу помощи!
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E-mail:
Address:
Canada
Phone: 604-********
Objective
Highly qualified Security Specialist possessing strong analytical skills, meticulous in a deadline environment with more than 10-years experience is looking for a challenging career.
Work Experience
✔ Strong experience in large scale networks, operating systems and security practices
✔ Expert knowledge in IT risk, cryptography, security network analysis, systems/network audits, and implementation of secure Internet solutions
✔ Excellent strategic and problem solving skills
✔ Solid background in information system technologies
✔ Experience in working with corporate business clients
✔ Scheduled for the CISSP certification exam
Technical Skills
Telecommunication CISCO(6 years), CISCO PIX(6 years), CISCO IOS Feature Set (6 years), TCP/IP (DHCP, NAT, Dynamic Routing Protocols) (11 years), IP Applications (HTTP/S, POP3, SMTP, FTP, TELNET, SSH, NNTP, LDAP, SNMP) (11 years), Frame Relay (3 yeras), Ethernet(14 years), Firewalls (6 years), TACACS+, RADIUS, Kerberos, Sendmail, sniffer, HP OpenView, Public Key infrastructure (PKI) (11 years), SSL, DES, Internet perimeter (6 years), role-based Access Control (RBAC) (11 years) and Identity Management, Remote Network Administration;
Intrusion Detection System/IDS Real Secure Network 10/100, Real Secure Internet Scanner (5 years)
Operating System Solaris(Unix)
(7 years), Windows 95/98/NT/2000/XP (10 years), Novell Netware (9 years)
Methodologies Threat Risk methodologies (TRA), Security Tests and Test Methodologies
Other Languages & Technologies C/C++, Visual C++, Visual Basic, SQL, HTML, UML, Ms Visio, shell, sed/awk, IIS, Apache, Network based Anti Virus software, Microsoft Office Desktop products
Database systems Informix, Access, dBase
Hardware All IBM/PC-compatible hardware, Sun SPARC
Employment History
Position: Technical Services Representative August, 2005 to Present
*********** Corporation, Coquitlam, B.C., Canada
http://www.***********.com
Install Windows 2000 server, DHCP, DNS, support LAN
Provide general maintenance of workstations. Install updating patches, security patches, antivirus softwares
Perform PC equipment installations and troubleshooting
Perform general maintenance on workstations and systems restore from backups
Maintain technical problem history using a software program
Achievements- found and implemented a program with a result of 10 percent improvement of productivity
Position: Senior Security Analyst 1996 to 2005
Central Bank of Russia, ****** Regional Division,
Apply information security principles, techniques and standards for network operating systems
Supervised all security projects for the largest bank network in Russia http://www.cbr.ru/eng/regions/ ).
During my tenure we suffered no losses due to fraudulent misrepresentation, theft of electronic money transfer, or unauthorized access to any bank systems
Implemented cryptography systems to protect Electronic Funds Transfer (EFT, PKI)
Designed and implemented network security (firewall IOS feature set, CISCO, IDS)
Provided a secure system for the bank’s confidential files. Prevented fraud and unauthorized access to bank’s data from inside and outside intruders
Developed security standards and procedures. Product and network penetration testing
Position: Senior Security Analyst 1995 to 1996,
Federal Tax Department, ******, Russia.
Supervised all security related projects in the Federal Tax Department
Designed and implemented network security
Provided a secure system for the bank’s confidential files. Prevented fraud and unauthorized access to the bank’s data from inside and outside intruders
Performed network upgrades and enhancements
Implemented and supervised security procedures to protect confidential data
Education
Completed courses
Systems and Tools of Cryptography Protection 2004
Providing Security on CISCO based LAN/WAN 2001
Vulnerabilities of Bank’s Telecommunications Systems
and Their Protections 2000
Building Reliable and Protected CISCO based LAN/WAN 2000
Informix Administration 1998
SUN Solaris 2.X System and Network Administration 1998
Novell Netware 4 Installation, Configuration, Administration
and Advanced Administration 1996
Complex Protection Information, Processed by
PC and LAN 1995
Masters degree - Computer Engineering 1978-1983
****** State Technical University,
******, Russia.
Certificates
Network Security Certificate, BrainBench Transcript ID#: 5639295
http://www.brainbench.com/xml/ 2005