Покритикуйте резюме, пожалуйста

[Spender]

Доброе время суток!
Недавно приехал в Канаду, и естественно озадачился проблемой поиска работы.
Буду очень признателен за критику получившегося резюме.

Заранее спасибо!

FIRST NAME LAST NAME
XX SOME Road, #XXXX
Etobicoke, ON M9A 0B2
Phone: (XXX) XXX-XXXX Email: login@host.com

PROFILE
Dynamic, creatively thinking, performance driven ASP.Net/C# Developer with four years of experience and expertise in designing and developing Web-base applications, Windows Forms Applications with reach Graphical User Interface and client-server solutions using state of the art development tools and the latest technologies.

EDUCATION
M.S. in Computer Science, 2000-2006
St. Petersburg State Polytechnical University, Russia

CERTIFICATIONS
Microsoft Certified Application Developer
 Designing and Developing Windows®-based Applications by Using the Microsoft® .NET Framework
 Microsoft® .NET Framework 2.0 - Windows®-based Client Development
 Microsoft® .NET Framework 2.0 - Application Development Foundation

TECHNICAL EXPERTISE
Microsoft Visual Studio 2003/2005/2008, .NET Framework 2.0/3.0/3.5, C#, APS.Net, AJAX ASP.Net, WCF/WPF, LINQ, XML, CSS, HTML, SOAP, UML, MS SQL Server 2005, ADO.Net, Microsoft Windows Server 2003/XP/Vista, IIS, COM/DCOM/OPC, C/C++/C#

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Company Name November 2008 – Present
ASP.Net/C# Developer ….. Designer and developer of the FX Market Monitor, front-end Web solution for the visual presentation for the proprietary Forex monitoring/trading system. FX Market Monitor provides rich and flexible GUI utilizing ASP.Net/C# technology, APS.NET AJAX technology, ASP.Net Xtra family of controls by DevExpress and In-house developed components. Other responsibilities included:
 Dynamic extensive FX charting using ASP.Net AJAX
 Client-Server module for FX Market Monitor - MetaTrader4™ platform communications
 Charting/Trading data management, using MS SQL Server 2005

Company Name November 2006 – November 2008
Senior ASP.Net/C# Developer…..Designer and developer of the VAST DREAM for Windows, an extensive GUI for the state of the art Industrial Vibration Analysis and Diagnostic environment. VAST DREAM for Windows utilizes multi-threaded logic and real-time data acquisition algorithms and techniques. Full scale visual effects added using TeeChart for .NET by Steema and .NET WinForm Xtra family of controls by DevExpress. VAST On-Line DREAM, an online system for the remote management of the vibration controls via the Internet. VAST On-Line DREAM utilizes ASP.Net/C# and ASP.Net AJAX.
Other responsibilities included:
 VAST Universal Server, using WCF (Windows Communication Foundation) technology
 VAST Universal Client, using MS SQL Server 2005 and the set of the proprietary data acquisition algorithms
 VAST Universal Protocol, an XML-based API for the development of the VAST Universal drivers
 Personalized and customized web-applications
 Acquired data presentation system utilizing multiple formats (charts, graphs, tables)

Company Name January 2005 - November 2006
.Net/C# Developer……Designer and developer of the VAST OPC Server, scalable multi-user solution for the state of the art Industrial Vibration Control environment using Microsoft OLE for Process Control (OPC) DataAccess v3.0, MODBUS protocol for the data acquisition and data sharing between different SCADA (Supervisory Control and Data Acquisition) systems. Other responsibilities included:
 Continuous real-time data storage to MS SQL Server 2005 database
 Acquired data presentation system utilizing multiple formats (charts, graphs, tables)

[Gatchinskiy]

образование и сертификации - в самый зад, скиллс - распределить по категория, (базы данных, технологии, языки итд ) и оформить в виде баллетед лист, расширить описания работ и респонсибилити, когда пишешь что делал начинай с глаголов developed, implemented, troubleshhoted, analyzed etc. ...рано посылать такое, надо шлифовать, имхо...

[Stanislav]

образование и сертификации - в самый зад, скиллс - распределить по категория, (базы данных, технологии, языки итд ) и оформить в виде баллетед лист, расширить описания работ и респонсибилити, когда пишешь что делал начинай с глаголов developed, implemented, troubleshhoted, analyzed etc. ...рано посылать такое, надо шлифовать, имхо...

Кароче, на мудреные слова не смотрите - просто переделайте по шаблону Word

[Spender]

Отредактировал

PERSONAL INFO

OBJECTIVE
Looking a challenging position as ASP.Net/C# Developer.

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
 Over 5 years experience in the Information Technology field
 4+ years in .Net platform including .Net Framework, C#, ASP.Net, XML/XSLT
 Expertise in designing and developing WinForms Applications with reach Graphical User Interface
 Extensive experience in developing client-server solutions using state of the art development tools
 In-depth knowledge and profound understanding of relational databases
 Extensive experience with MS SQL Server
 Excellent knowledge of SDLC, software development methodologies and processes
 Strong analytical, research, and problem-solving skills
 Excellent interpersonal and communicational skills

TECHNICAL EXPERTISE
Languages: C# 1.1/2.0/3.0/3.5, VB.NET, C/C++, T-SQL (DDL, DML), VB script, JavaScript, HTML/DHTML, XML (XSD, XDR, XSLT).
Technologies: .Net Framework 1.1/2.0/3.0/3.5, ADO.NET, LINQ, WCF, .Net Remoting, .NET Provider model, COM/DCOM/OPC.
Databases: MS SQL Server 2005.
Methodology: Object-oriented design and programming (OOD&P), SDLC, graphical user interface (GUI) design, Database design and implementation, UML, Multi-tier application development.
Development Tools: Visual Studio.NET 2003/2005/2008 Team Edition, Microsoft SQL Server Management Studio, MS Visio, MS Office.
Web Development: ASP.NET/C#, ASP.Net AJAX, Web Services, IIS, JavaScript, HTML, DHTML, CSS, Themes, XML/XSLT.
Operating Systems: Windows Server 2003, MS Windows XP/2000/NT, Windows 95/98/Me.

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
COMPANY YYY November 2008 – Present
ASP.Net/C# Developer ….. Designed and developed the FX Market Monitor, front-end Web solution for the visual presentation for the proprietary Forex monitoring/trading system. FX Market Monitor provides rich and flexible GUI utilizing ASP.Net/C# technology, APS.NET AJAX technology, ASP.Net Xtra family of controls by DevExpress and In-house developed components. Other responsibilities included:
 Implemented dynamic extensive FX charting using ASP.Net AJAX
 Developed ASP.Net user controls
 Developed client-server module for FX Market Monitor - MetaTrader4™ platform communications
 Designed database structure to accommodate business requirements, using MS SQL Server 2005 and MS SQL Server Management Studio


COMPANY XXX November 2006 – November 2008
Senior ASP.Net/C# Developer…..Designed and developed the VAST DREAM for Windows, an extensive GUI for the state of the art Industrial Vibration Analysis and Diagnostic environment. VAST DREAM for Windows utilizes multi-threaded logic and real-time data acquisition algorithms and techniques. Full scale visual effects added using TeeChart for .NET by Steema and .NET WinForm Xtra family of controls by DevExpress. VAST On-Line DREAM, an online system for the remote management of the vibration controls via the Internet. VAST On-Line DREAM utilizes ASP.Net/C# and ASP.Net AJAX.
Other responsibilities included:
 Analyzed business requirement
 Analyzed user feedback and prioritized development features
 Defined technical details of the solution
 Developed VAST Universal Server, using WCF (Windows Communication Foundation) technology
 Developed VAST Universal Client, using MS SQL Server 2005 and the set of the proprietary data acquisition algorithms
 Designed and implemented VAST Universal Protocol, an XML-based API for the development of the VAST Universal drivers
 Developed template functionality edit/view for personalized web-based system
 Developed data presentation system utilizing multiple formats (charts, graphs, tables)


COMPANY XXX January 2005 - November 2006
.Net/C# Developer……Designed and developed of the VAST OPC Server, scalable multi-user solution for the state of the art Industrial Vibration Control environment using Microsoft OLE for Process Control (OPC) DataAccess v3.0, MODBUS protocol for the data acquisition and data sharing between different SCADA (Supervisory Control and Data Acquisition) systems. Other responsibilities included:
 Designed and implemented continuous real-time data storage to MS SQL Server 2005 database
 Developed data presentation system utilizing multiple formats (charts, graphs, tables)
 Tested, fixed, and modified application according to changes in user requirements

EDUCATION
M.S. in Computer Science, 2000-2006
St. Petersburg State Polytechnical University, Russia

CERTIFICATIONS
Microsoft Certified Application Developer
 Designing and Developing Windows®-based Applications by Using the Microsoft® .NET Framework
 Microsoft® .NET Framework 2.0 - Windows®-based Client Development
 Microsoft® .NET Framework 2.0 - Application Development Foundation