резюме работает неправильно

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Рукрутеры думают, что я работаю на стороне мобайл девайсов, или wireless. Причина скорее всего заключается в неправильных акцентах в резюме, которое до последнего дня было таковым:

Software Developer, Research In Motion, Mississauga, Canada, May 2010 - Present
http://www.rim.com

Designed Blackberry Attachment Service OpenOffice ODF and Microsoft Office Document distillers.

* Developed Blackberry Attachment Service Microsoft Word Binary and Microsoft Word Office Open (ECMA-376) distillers functionality improving parsing numbered lists, document fields, and paragraph formatting providing better user experience when viewing the Microsoft Office documents on Blackberry devices.

* Designed an effective parsing automat for the OpenOffice.org and IBM Lotus Symphony documents (OASIS ODT v.1.1/1.2 standards) considerably amending performance and reliability of the Blackberry Attachment Service ODT distiller. Improved parsing ODT numbering list and heading, document fields, the document TOC and hyperlinks, document paragraph formatting.

* Utilized Microsoft Office Document Cryptography Specification for opening and viewing Microsoft Office Binary (doc, xls, ppt) password-protected (XOR obfuscated or RC4 encrypted, or CryptoAPI RC4 encrypted) documents, and AES protected Microsoft Office ECMA-376 (docx, xlsx, pptx) documents on Blackberry devices.

* Implemented OASIS ODF v.1.1/1.2 standard for opening and viewing password-protected OpenDocuments (odt, ods, odp) encrypted with Blowfish CFB.

* Reviewed the code of the Attachment Service components fixing potentially crash-causing defects. Analyzed the Attachment Service memory crash dumps spotting/fixing software defects.

* Mentored Co-op developers.

Думаю, переделать так:

Software Developer, Research In Motion, Mississauga, Canada, May 2010 - Present
http://www.rim.com

Designed attachment server distillers for opening and viewing e-mail attachments, providing better server reliability and performance, and enhanced user experience (http://ca.blackberry.com/smartphones/fe ... hments.jsp).

* Developed Microsoft Word Binary and Microsoft Word Office Open (ECMA-376) distillers functionality improving parsing numbered lists, document fields, and paragraph formatting.

* Designed an effective parsing automat for OpenOffice ODF (OASIS ODT v.1.1/1.2) and HTML documents, considerably amending server performance and reliability. Improved parsing ODT numbering list and heading, document fields, the document TOC and hyperlinks, document paragraph formatting.

* Utilized Microsoft Office Document Cryptography Specification for opening and viewing Microsoft Office Binary (doc, xls, ppt) password-protected (XOR obfuscated or RC4 encrypted, or CryptoAPI RC4 encrypted) documents, and AES protected Microsoft Office ECMA-376 (docx, xlsx, pptx) documents.

* Implemented OASIS ODF v.1.1/1.2 standard for opening and viewing password-protected OpenDocuments (odt, ods, odp) encrypted with Blowfish CFB.

* Reviewed the code of the Attachment Service components fixing potentially crash-causing defects. Analyzed the Attachment Service memory crash dumps spotting/fixing software defects.

* Mentored Co-op developers.

Какой вариант лучше?
Спасибо.

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Вариант ....

Software Developer, Research In Motion, Mississauga, Canada, May 2010 - Presenthttp://www.rim.com

Designed attachments server components providing better server performance and reliability.

* Developed Microsoft Word Binary and Microsoft Word Office Open (ECMA-376) e-mail attachment server components improving parsing numbered lists, document fields and formatting. The components are implemented using Microsoft Visual C++ 9.0.
* Designed effective OpenOffice ODF (OASIS ODT v.1.1/1.2) and HTML parsers improving parsing ODT numbering list and heading, document fields, the document TOC and hyperlinks, document paragraph formatting. The components are developed using Microsoft Visual C++ 9.0.
* Utilized Microsoft Office Document Cryptography Specification for opening and viewing Microsoft Office Binary (doc, xls, ppt) password-protected (XOR obfuscated or RC4 encrypted, or CryptoAPI RC4 encrypted) documents, and AES protected Microsoft Office ECMA-376 (docx, xlsx, pptx) documents.
* Implemented OASIS ODF v.1.1/1.2 standard for opening and viewing password-protected OpenDocuments (odt, ods, odp) encrypted with Blowfish CFB.
* Reviewed the code of the Attachment Service components fixing potentially crash-causing defects. Analyzed the Attachment Service memory crash dumps spotting/fixing software defects.

* Mentored Co-op developers.

Так лучше?
Спастбо.