помогите тану !!!

[lemik]

Доброе время суток!
Прошу помощи у славянского народа ))
Написал я резюме но мне кажется что оно не очень по Канадски правильное.
Резюме программиста.
Может, посоветуете, как его исправить?
Или скажите, где такие могут быть нужны?

My name …………………………………
Burnaby,
Canada
Email:…………………………………………

Internship Objective

I am seeking a challenging opportunity in an environment where I can make a positive contribution to my employer’s success, while continuing to learn and strengthen my IT, management, and marketing skills.

Education
British Columbia Institute of Technology, Burnaby, BC
Business Venture Program (2008 – present)
• Expected date of completion – April 2008;
• Modules include: Business English, Business Planning, Marketing, Finance, International Trade;
Karazin Kharkov National University, Ukraine
Scholl of Mathematics and Mechanical Engineering (2003-2007)
Bachelor in Science in Informational Technology

Training programs
• Group dynamics (2003), Leadership (2003), Conflict resolution (2002), Negotiation skills (2002)
Work Experience
Yupiter Ltd, Ukraine (2007-2008)
Developer Analyst
• Software development, testing, and product improvement in C#;
• Microsoft SQL server 2005 data base support;
• Access data base design and support;
Liberal-Democratic Party of Ukraine
Parliament elections 2007
Legal Assistant

• Candidates portfolio support;
• Data base support;
• Assistance in special event planning and implementation;
Volunteer Experience
From Heart to Heart International Sponsorship Program, Burnaby (2007-now)
Database Administrator
• Recommended and designed database that contributed to elimination mainframe support structure with 20% decrease in support costs.
• Solving computing problems for program staff
• Software and hardware upgrades implementation
Karazin Kharkov National University, Ukraine
• School of Mathematics and Mechanical Engineering (2004-2007)
Special event coordinator;
• Special event planning, organising, and evaluation;

Special Skills and Abilities

Computer
• Basic level: С\С++, Java, C#;
• Database: MSSQL Server, Access;
• Web technologies: HTML, JSP, CSS, PHP, UML;
• Development framework: Microsoft Visual Studio, Jbuilder, Eclipse, Photoshop CS2, Corel Drove 10, Microsoft office;
• Operating Systems: Windows, MS Dos;
Other Personal and Professional Skills

• 5 years of proven and progressive experience in special event management;
• Strong analytical and communication skills;
• Detail-oriented, efficient and organized professional;
• Resourceful in the completion of projects, and effective at multi-tasking;
• Can organize own personal time and tasks efficiently, and can work effectively under pressure;
• Can present a professional company image to clients, fellow workers, and/or peers;
References
• Available upon request;

[Gatchinskiy]

I am seeking a challenging opportunity in an environment where I can make a positive contribution to my employer’s success, while continuing to learn and strengthen my IT, management, and marketing skills.

Education
British Columbia Institute of Technology, Burnaby, BC
Business Venture Program (2008 – present)
• Expected date of completion – April 2008;
• Modules include: Business English, Business Planning, Marketing, Finance, International Trade;
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не понял, если ты программист нафиг ты на business учишься и тем более в резюме указываешь, или я что-то не догоняю?