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[Applushka]

NAME
Address, Burnaby, BC V5H 1G4
Tel: (604) 222 2222
E-mail: 222@gmail.com

Junior Database Analyst / Report Writer (Developer)


I am looking for an Entry level position as Data Analyst / Report Writer to gain my experience.

SKILLS / ABILITIES
• Experience with SQL Server 2005 T-SQL views / stored procedures
• Experience developing reports with SOL Server Reporting Services 2005
• Proficient user-level knowledge of the following Microsoft tools: Excel, Word, Outlook, Visio, Access, PowerPoint
• Understanding of following concepts: XML, OLAP, Data Modeling, Process Modeling, Logical and Physical Data Structures
• Excellent attention to details
• Knowledge of analytic, mathematic, and basic statistical methods
• Excellent written and verbal communication skills
• Quick learner, positive attitude
• A team player who can work independently
• Good planning and organizational abilities
• Works well in pressure situations
• Strong troubleshooting skills
• Able to multi-task and adapt to changing priorities
• Able to work with minimum supervision



EDUCATION
Bachelor degree. Computer science. Irkutsk State Technical University, Russia 2000 – 2005

ACADEMICAL EXPERIENCE:
Data Analyst/Report Writer, Irkutsk State University, Russia. 10/2003 – 11/2004
I have built Access Database in the past and I work well with MS Excel, built reports that answer unusual end-user questions.
Coded SOL routines to execute data transfers between Excel worksheets and Access tables. Developed logical and physical data models using the standard tool, ER Studio.
Use MS Access, SOL and other software to formulate queries to extract, manipulate, format and present data stored in relational databases.


Cover letter
AVAILABLE IMMEDIATELY:
Enthusiastic Entry Level Database Analyst / Report Developer

ABC Company
Company Street Address
City

SUBJECT: RESUME OF NAME
I read with interest your advertisement for Junior Database Analyst / Report Developer at Your Company. I am interested in being employed by a company with your specialization in IT.
This entry-level position matches my career interests and is strongly compatible with my skills and experience.
Attached is a copy of my resume that details my academic qualifications and practical experience gained through the cooperative education program.

Thank you for taking your time to review my resume. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my education, practical skills, and background would qualify me to be a member of the Company.
If you are interested in my candidate, please inform me. I am available for an interview at your convenience. You can find additional information about me from the enclosed resume.

I look forward to hearing from you.


Name
Tel: (604) 222 2222
E-mail: 222@gmail.com

[PIX]

Вообщем мне нравиться.

кроме самого факта отсутствия опыта работы...
Ну и скилзы я бы чуток расширил а абилитиз уменьшил.

[Stanislav]

XML - это не концепция, а просто язык такой.
Можно добавить Data Mining до кучи к Data Modeling.
Ну и если OLAP, тогда экспириенс с MS Analysis Services - ибо в противном случае что вы использовали для OLAP?

[Applushka]

Можно добавить Data Mining до кучи к Data Modeling.

моделирование есть, остальное добавим

Ну и если OLAP, тогда экспириенс с MS Analysis Services - ибо в противном случае что вы использовали для OLAP?

у меня нет такого опыта, речь идет о том, что я это знаю, ну или понимаю хотя бы что это такое.

[Applushka]

а вообще XML стоит ли указывать?

[Applushka]

Вообщем мне нравиться.

кроме самого факта отсутствия опыта работы...
Ну и скилзы я бы чуток расширил а абилитиз уменьшил.

да, опыта нет, и не предвидится, если на работу не возьмут

[Alenka]

NAME
Address, Burnaby, BC V5H 1G4
Tel: (604) 222 2222
E-mail: 222@gmail.com

Junior Database Analyst / Report Writer (Developer)


I am looking for an Entry level position as a Data Analyst / Report Writer /to gain my experience/ <- don't need this

SKILLS / ABILITIES
• Experience with SQL Server 2005 T-SQL views / stored procedures
• Experience developing reports with SOL Server Reporting Services 2005
• Proficient user-level knowledge of the following Microsoft tools: Excel, Word, Outlook, Visio, Access, PowerPoint
• Understanding of the following concepts: XML, OLAP, Data Modeling, Process Modeling, Logical, and Physical Data Structures
• Excellent attention to details
• Knowledge of analytical, mathematical, and basic statistical methods
• Excellent written and verbal communication skills
• Strong troubleshooting skills
• Good planning and organizational abilities
• Ablitye to multi-task and adapt to changing priorities a?? you can say changing environment or sothing like this
• Ablity to work with minimum supervision


• Quick learner, positive attitude
• A team player who can work independently shouldn'd be here
• Work/s/ well in pressure situations




EDUCATION
Bachelor's degree (concentration: Computer science). Irkutsk State Technical University, Russia 2000 – 2005

ACADEMICAL EXPERIENCE:
Data Analyst/Report Writer, Irkutsk State University, Russia. 10/2003 – 11/2004
I have built Access Database in the past and I worked well with MS Excel, built reports that answered unusual end-users' questions.
Coded SOL routines to execute data transfers between Excel worksheets and Access tables. Developed logical and physical data models using the standard tool, ER Studio.
Useed MS Access, SOL and other software to formulate queries to extract, manipulate, format and present data stored in relational databases.

SOL and SQL - are the same?
not sure what Coded SOL routines to execute data transfers between Excel worksheets and Access tables means, may be need to rephrase it

Cover letter
AVAILABLE IMMEDIATELY:
Enthusiastic Entry Level Database Analyst / Report Developer

ABC Company
Company Street Address
City

SUBJECT: RESUME OF NAME
I have read with interest your advertisement for a Junior Database Analyst / Report Developer at Your Company. I am interested in being employed by a company with your specialization in IT.
This entry-level position matches my career interests and is strongly compatible with my skills and experience.
Attached is a copy of my resume that details my academic qualifications and practical experience gained through the cooperative which one?? education program.

Thank you for taking your time to review my resume. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my education, practical skills, and background would qualify me to be a member of the Company.
If you are interested in the candidate like, please inform me. I am available for an interview at your convenience. You can find additional information about me from the enclosed resume.

I look forward to hearing from you.


Name
Tel: (604) 222 2222
E-mail: 222@gmail.com

вообще я переписала бы все в плане английского, но надо время, если хочешь, можно по телефону, по клавиатуре стучать долго. Вообще для ентри левел it's ok, так что можно и не хотеть

[Stanislav]

Ну и если OLAP, тогда экспириенс с MS Analysis Services - ибо в противном случае что вы использовали для OLAP?

у меня нет такого опыта, речь идет о том, что я это знаю, ну или понимаю хотя бы что это такое.

Ну это понятно, но вы же хотите анализатором данных, а никакого опыта у вас совершенно нет Про концепцию в википедии любой прочитает... Главное не перепутать OLAP и OLTP
Постройте дома пару Excel PivotTable, посмотрите, как он коннектится к внешним источникам данных (в т.ч. к MS AS) - и можете написать, что есть опыт.

[Stanislav]

а вообще XML стоит ли указывать?

Прочитайте, что это такое, осмыслите и укажите как Languages (только не там, где английский ) - это модно сейчас

[Applushka]

спасибо!

[Applushka]

если о компании, куда подаешься, ничего не известно (даже название), то что написать в заголовке Cover letter?

[Gatchinskiy]

To Whom It May Concern...

[ura]

that answer unusual end-user questions

Это кажется называется "non-deterministic" или "fuzzy" если я правильно понимаю суть приложения.

SOL я так понимая очепятка SQL.

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ACADEMICAL EXPERIENCE:
Data Analyst/Report Writer, Irkutsk State University, Russia. 10/2003 – 11/2004
I have built Access Database in the past and I work well with MS Excel, built reports that answer unusual end-user questions.
Coded SOL routines to execute data transfers between Excel worksheets and Access tables. Developed logical and physical data models using the standard tool, ER Studio.
Use MS Access, SOL and other software to formulate queries to extract, manipulate, format and present data stored in relational databases.
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я бы заменил так чтобы выглядело smooth:
ACADEMICAL EXPERIENCE:
Data Analyst/Report Writer, (PROJECT NAME)
Irkutsk State University, Russia. 10/2003 – 11/2004
My day to day activities included:
- Database development and design for MS Access, MS SQL Server, MS Excel depending on the area of application;
- Building reports for answerring to non-deterministic end-user queries;
- Coding SQL routines for executing data transfers between MS Excel worksheets and MS SQL/Access tables;
- Development of logical and physical data models using standard tools as ER Studio, Enterprise Architect, MS Enterprise Data Manager, etc.
- Using MS Access, MS SQL and other software to formulate queries for extracting, manipulating, formatting and rendering data stored in relational databases.

[Algor]

- указано в скилсах , но нечетко прописано в опыте работы - Experience developing reports with SOL Server Reporting Services 2005
а для данной позиции это было бы плюсом
- и наоборот, в опыте указано extract, manipulate, format and present data . ну так и укажите в скилсах ETL, это будет более выигрышным ключевым словом

[Applushka]

- указано в скилсах , но нечетко прописано в опыте работы - Experience developing reports with SOL Server Reporting Services 2005
а для данной позиции это было бы плюсом
- и наоборот, в опыте указано extract, manipulate, format and present data . ну так и укажите в скилсах ETL, это будет более выигрышным ключевым словом

спасибо, учту