Опять резюме С++ девелопера, help

[vg]

Парни, я таки получил lay off… Так сказать первый канадский опыт, наверное, хоть и отрицательный, но полезный. Я включил этот опыт в новую редакцию резюме. У меня по-прежнему плохо с английским языком. Поэтому прошу посмотреть и подправить особо нечитаемые и корявые фразы - новый блок касается компании GENESISTP. Любую критику, в том числе по «старым» блокам в резюме, приму с благодарностью.

Спасибо.

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VG
Mississauga, ON, L5N 3A8
vg@canada.com

Objective

Software Developer position where I can apply over 11 years of programming experience and solid background in RDBMS, GIS and CAD application development.

Summary of Qualifications

• C++ Software Developer experience – more than 11 years.
• Participated in full software development life cycle in the roles of Software Developer, team member and mentor.
• Built object-oriented multi-tiered multi-threaded middleware.
• Developed databases, RDBMS client/server applications and GUI.
• Possess scientific and technical expertise in designing GIS and CAD products.
• Versatile in software and hardware products.

Technical Summary

• Operating Systems : Microsoft Windows NT/2000/XP/2003.
• Languages : C#, C/C++, .NET C++ extension, AutoDesk AutoLISP/ Visual LISP, ESRI Avenue, Delphi, SQL, VBA, XML.
• IDE : Microsoft Visual C++ .NET, Borland C++ Builder, Turbo C++, Watcom C/C++.
• General client/server Technologies and Libraries : COM/DCOM, SCM/SCC, ATL, STL, Multithread Programming WinAPI, WinSock (stream- and RAW-sockets, SOCKS 4/5), SMAPI.
• GUI Libraries and Tools : MFC, Microsoft and Borland RAD tools (.NET Windows Forms, VCL), WinAPI.
• GIS/CAD Libraries : ESRI esriCore/esriMx ArcObjects/ArcMap Object libraries for ESRI ArcGIS framework, C/C++ ADSRX/ADS/ADI libraries for AutoCAD/ AutoCAD MAP platform, C++ ObjectARX libraries for AutoCAD.
• RDBMS Libraries and Technologies : ADO, ADO.NET, DAO, ODBC, MFC (ODBC wrappers), VCL (BDE ODBC sockets and ADO wrappers).
• Network Protocols : TCP/IP, UDP, HTTP, SOCKS, SMTP, POP3.
• Databases : Microsoft SQL Server, Microsoft Access, IBM DB2, Borland InterBase, Borland Paradox.
• GIS/CAD : ESRI ArcView GIS 3.0/3.1, ESRI Arc/Info 7.1, ESRI ArcGIS 8.2/8.3, AutoDesk AutoCad MAP Release 3, AutoDesk AutoCad 10/11/12/13/14/2000/2002.

Work Experience

Software Developer, Genesis TP, 2005
http://www.genesistp.com

Designed and implemented efficient 3D algorithms analyzing and transforming the geometry of the plane building structures. Developed smart visual drafting tools for the company’s engineering staff considerably improved computer design of panelized steel building structures.

• Developed an original efficient algorithm splitting 3D plane geometry objects. The recursive splitting algorithm is easier to be coded as compared with the well-known modifications of the general Weiler-Atherton clipping algorithm working especially along with complicated non-convex polygons, including self-intersecting polygons and splitter polylines. It made a rich foundation in geometry analysis of variety kinds of 3D objects.
• Implemented CAD software commands running on top of AutoDesk AutoCAD 2002 transforming the geometry of plane structural elements. The commands which included splitting and adding vertexes functionality were coded using Microsoft Visual C++ .NET 2002 and ObjectARX 2002 library.
• Designed and implemented C++ wrappers of the AutoDesk Jig classes improving the UI development with the C++ ObjectARX 2002 library and Microsoft Visual C++ .NET 2002.
• Developed and coded custom ObjectARX smart grip classes using a custom color ramp and tool tips to get information about structural elements designed.
• Implemented UI commands for the steel roof panel design using Microsoft Visual C++ .NET 2002 and AutoDesk ObjectARX.

Senior Software Developer, Territorial Fund of Geological Information, 2003 – 2004
http://www.mnr.gov.ru/part/?pid=381

Designed middleware, multi-tiered architecture and client applications for local government geology information systems. The middleware considerably increased robustness of the systems, improved stability and reduced time and efforts needed to develop client applications. The new architecture provided C++ and VB interfaces that were better adapted to different skill sets of staff members.

• Wrote enterprise requirements for operations with the databases and the samples for C++ and VB enterprise programmers.
• Designed and implemented object-oriented database access layer with COM interfaces, C++ classes and handle-oriented C-style API functions.
• Implemented RDBMS access modules for multi-tier architecture using wrappers of MFC, VCL, ODBC API, ADO, ADO.NET.
• Developed client/server DCOM middleware of the Geology Objects Universal Catalog.
• Integrated client side applications with ESRI GIS.
• Developed custom GIS plug-in for ESRI AcrGIS (implemented in C++ as COM server).
• Designed a mixture of data access routines and GUI with C++, C#, ADO.NET and Transact-SQL.
• Designed business-to-business applications using C#, XML, XPath and ADO.NET.
• Supervised enterprise’s .NET C++ and .NET VB programmers.

Software Developer, The Administration of the Magadan Region of the Russian Federation, 2000 – 2003
http://www.magadan.ru

• Proposed the object-oriented model of mining resources.
• Implemented the database storage mechanism for the model. Created MS SQL Server corporate database.
• Developed data exchange modules using WinSock.
• Developed network traffic monitoring tools using WinSock RAW-sockets (firewall logs analysis, troubleshooting with TCP/IP packets and incident analysis).

Software Developer, Enterprise Magadan Geology, 1996 – 2000

• Collected user requirements, conducted code reviews and design meetings.
• Represented the software in leading scientific and industrial enterprises for discussions.
• Created MS SQL Server corporate database and the databases for stand-alone applications (Microsoft Access and dBase data format).
• Wrote front end GUI applications for the databases browsing, editing and creating reports.
• Integrated the applications with ESRI / AutoDesk GIS.
• Wrote user documentation.
• Packaged the software into an installation program.

Programmer, The Khabarovsk State Technical University CAD / GIS laboratory. Committee of Land Resources, 1987 - 1999

• Developed CAD applications for optimizing and drafting the building structures.
• Customized user drafting tools for digital mapping and land monitoring GIS software.

Education

Master of Science, Majored in Computer Aided Design in Civil Engineering, Khabarovsk Technical University, Russia

Additional Courses, Seminars & Qualifications

ESRI ArcGIS for Municipal Services, Magadan, Russia - 2003
Local Area Networks for Technical Staff, Magadan, Russia –1997
AutoCad 12 for Civil Engineers, Moscow, Russia - 1996

References available upon request.

[Gatchinskiy]

VG
Mississauga, ON, L5N 3A8
vg@canada.com

где телефоны домашний/cell?

Summary of Qualifications

• C++ Software Developer experience – more than 11 years.
• Participated in full software development life cycle in the roles of Software Developer, team member and mentor.
• Built object-oriented multi-tiered multi-threaded middleware.
• Developed databases, RDBMS client/server applications and GUI.
• Possess scientific and technical expertise in designing GIS and CAD products.
• Versatile in software and hardware products.

Summary of Qualifications я бы переписал, там надо показать какой ты хороший во всех направлениях, предложениям типа 'Participated in full software development life cycle' и 'Developed databases' не место там, это само собой разумеется, только highlights ...

Technical Summary

• Operating Systems : Microsoft Windows NT/2000/XP/2003.
• Languages : C#, C/C++, .NET C++ extension, AutoDesk AutoLISP/ Visual LISP, ESRI Avenue, Delphi, SQL, VBA, XML.
Work Experience

Operating Systems я бы засунул вниз, или убрал ... к языкам бы приписал сколько лет знаешь e.g. C#[3 years], etc

Software Developer, Genesis TP, 2005
http://www.genesistp.com

город какой? Россия?

[AlexANB]

Software Developer, Genesis TP, 2005
Senior Software Developer, Territorial Fund of Geological Information, 2003 – 2004
Software Developer, The Administration of the Magadan Region of the Russian Federation, 2000 – 2003
Programmer, The Khabarovsk State Technical University CAD / GIS laboratory. Committee of Land Resources, 1987 - 1999

Месяцы требуется тоже указывать, не только годы. (хотя я и понимаю, что не хочется...)

[Alenka]

Я бы переписала Qualifications.
Вместо

Objective

Software Developer position where I can apply over 11 years of programming experience and solid background in RDBMS, GIS and CAD application development.

Summary of Qualifications

• C++ Software Developer experience – more than 11 years.
• Participated in full software development life cycle in the roles of Software Developer, team member and mentor.
• Built object-oriented multi-tiered multi-threaded middleware.
• Developed databases, RDBMS client/server applications and GUI.
• Possess scientific and technical expertise in designing GIS and CAD products.
• Versatile in software and hardware products.

что-нибудь типа:

Qualifications

A C++ Software Developer with over 11 years of experience. Key strengths include:
· Solid experience in performing the entire software development life cycle including …. (designing, coding, testing, and etc)
· Proven experience in database development such as designing … (not sure) RDBMS client/server applications and GUI
· Strong knowledge and experience in designing GIS and CAD products.

и так далее

RDBMS, GIS and CAD не рбязательно вставлять в двух местах и в Objective и в Summary of Qualifications.

про Versatile in software and hardware products не поняла что имеется в виду.

Я бы еще вставила что-то типа Result oriented team player но это так, по желанию...

[Ильгиз]

of variety kinds

of various kinds?

Предлагаю убрать прилагательное "well-known" как избыточное, а также разбить составное предложение о последней работе на части.

(Я не разбираюсь в алгоритмах геометрических преобразований, поэтому мои советы могут быть неверны).

Ссылка на mns.gov.ru показывает чью-то биографию. Кстати, может быть полезным составить ссылку в виде

Код: Выделить всё

http://www.online-translator.com/url/tran_url.asp
?lang=en&direction=re&autotranslate=on&transliterate=on
&url=http://www.mns.ru/blah-blah

[Yury]

of variety kinds

of various kinds?

Предлагаю убрать прилагательное "well-known" как избыточное, а также разбить составное предложение о последней работе на части.

(Я не разбираюсь в алгоритмах геометрических преобразований, поэтому мои советы могут быть неверны).

Ссылка на mns.gov.ru показывает чью-то биографию. Кстати, может быть полезным составить ссылку в виде

Код: Выделить всё

http://www.online-translator.com/url/tran_url.asp
?lang=en&direction=re&autotranslate=on&transliterate=on
&url=http://www.mns.ru/blah-blah

там есть английская версия (?pid=397)

хотя кому это может быть интересно?

[vg]

Спасибо парни и Alenka. В очередной раз выручаете меня.
Я подсправил очевидные промахи - "с телефоном", "various kinds". Убрал ссылку, которая теперь всё равно не работает (http://www.mnr.gov.ru/part/?pid=381), Там мужик какой-то вместо нашего подразделения. Может просто сослаться на минприроды (http://www.mnr.gov.ru)
Убрал операционные системы, добавил Миссиссагу, Канада для последней работы.
И, конечно же, переписал Qualifications, как советовали Alenka & Gatchinskiy. Alenke и Питерским особое спасибо. По Qualifications небольшие сомнения есть - может разрядить немного? Может убрать про математику, оптимизацию, и т.д?

Получились такие исправления:

Qualifications

A C++ Software Developer with over 11 years of experience. Key strengths include:
• Solid experience in performing the entire software development life cycle including designing, coding and testing.
• In depth knowledge of object-oriented design concepts and multi-tiered multi-threaded middleware. Hands-on practice of design patterns.
• Proven experience in database development and client/server software design.
• Strong knowledge, scientific and technical expertise in designing GIS and CAD applications. Solid background in computing operations and processing data in Mathematics, Civil Engineering (geometry analysis, statistics, optimizing and object modeling). Proficient in geology geo-mapping technologies.
• Excellent analytical skills and strong ability to perform both independently and as part of a team.

Technical Summary

• Languages : C/C++ ( over 11 years ), .NET C++ extension, C# , AutoDesk AutoLISP ( over 11 years ) / Visual LISP, ESRI Avenue ( over 4 years ), Delphi, SQL ( over 5 years ), VBA, XML.
• IDE and Instruments : Microsoft Visual C++ .NET, Microsoft Visual Source Safe, Borland C++ Builder, Turbo C++, Watcom C/C++.

...

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Проставил не везде кол-во лет. Ставил кол-во лет опыта, если больше 4 лет. Иначе будет, как кажется, агли. Рядом будет стоять C++ (> 11 years), и C# ( 2 years). Не знаю, как лучше.

2 Ильгиз,
Я постарался с моим нихтвершрейн переписать:

Software Developer, Genesis TP, Mississauga, Canada, 2005
http://www.genesistp.com

Designed and implemented efficient 3D algorithms analyzing and transforming the geometry of the plane building structures. Developed smart visual drafting tools for the company’s engineering staff considerably improved computer design of panelized steel building structures.

• Developed an original efficient algorithm splitting 3D plane geometry objects. The recursive splitting algorithm is easier to be coded as compared with modifications of the general Weiler-Atherton clipping algorithm. Working effectively along with non-convex polygons, the algorithm splits complicated plane objects, including self-intersecting polygons and splitting polylines. It made a rich foundation in geometry analysis of various kinds of 3D objects.
• Implemented CAD software commands running on top of AutoDesk AutoCAD 2002 transforming the geometry of plane structural elements. The commands which included splitting, adding and removing vertexes functionality were coded using Microsoft Visual C++ .NET 2002 and ObjectARX 2002 library.
• Designed and implemented C++ wrappers of the AutoDesk Jig classes improving the UI development with the C++ ObjectARX 2002 library and Microsoft Visual C++ .NET 2002.
• Developed and coded custom ObjectARX smart grip classes using a custom color ramp and tool tips to get information about structural elements designed.
• Implemented UI commands for the steel roof panel design using Microsoft Visual C++ .NET 2002 and AutoDesk ObjectARX.

[Gatchinskiy]

Получились такие исправления:

Qualifications

У тебя было прекрасно написано Summary of Qualifications, зачем менять на Qualifications? ... в том то и дело что у тебя Summary of Qualifications ...

A C++ Software Developer with over 11 years of experience. Key strengths include:
• Solid experience in performing the entire software development life cycle including designing, coding and testing.
• In depth knowledge of object-oriented design concepts and multi-tiered multi-threaded middleware. Hands-on practice of design patterns.
• Proven experience in database development and client/server software design.
• Strong knowledge, scientific and technical expertise in designing GIS and CAD applications. Solid background in computing operations and processing data in Mathematics, Civil Engineering (geometry analysis, statistics, optimizing and object modeling). Proficient in geology geo-mapping technologies.
• Excellent analytical skills and strong ability to perform both independently and as part of a team.

'A C++ Software Developer with over 11 years of experience. ' эта строчка была раньше у тебя в bulleted list, зачем ее выносить отдельно и нарушать структуру?

'Key strengths include:' убрать нафиг, ты же уже написал Summary of Qualifications зачем повторяться?

В Summary of Qualifications желательно для лучшего восприятия писать по одной строчке на bullet, не надо несколько предложений компоновать ...

Technical Summary

• Languages : C/C++ ( over 11 years ), .NET C++ extension, C# , AutoDesk AutoLISP ( over 11 years ) / Visual LISP, ESRI Avenue ( over 4 years ), Delphi, SQL ( over 5 years ), VBA, XML.

я бы заменил C/C++ ( over 11 years ) на C/C++ [11+ years] формат ...

Проставил не везде кол-во лет. Ставил кол-во лет опыта, если больше 4 лет. Иначе будет, как кажется, агли. Рядом будет стоять C++ (> 11 years), и C# ( 2 years). Не знаю, как лучше.

кол-во лет опыта лучше ставить только у основных языков/баз данных, везде не требуется ...

Software Developer, Genesis TP, Mississauga, Canada, 2005
http://www.genesistp.com

пропущены опять месяцы работы, это важно ... все равно спросят ... e.g. Feb 2005 - July 2005

[vg]

2 Gatchinskiy,
OK. Пофиксено. Спасибо!!!